|Reviews for Candy Boy|
| LightPhantom742 chapter 3 . 16h ago
Could they possibly be any more adorable together, I know they'll keep getting better. Maybe I shouldn't phrase it in quite that way since Roxas will be making an appearance pretty soon and that'll cause quite a few issues. They both come from broken dysfunctional homes and yet they've managed to make it this far and now they'll have each other. Awesome writing as usual and I can't wait for all the occasions and twists on the horizon.
| LightPhantom742 chapter 2 . 3/10
Keeping up with the great writing from the first chapter both with characters and detail. We got to meet more characters from the kh verse or ff depending on how you want to look at it and through their introduction we get more insight on Riku and how he interacts with his "friends". I love seeing their relationship grow further though and I really love the dialogue. I'm not really sure how to describe it though in that it seems realistic yet in a way to perfect. I'm not quite sure how to phrase it but I still really enjoy it. I feel bad for Sofa by the end of this seen just from meeting parents in the past I certainly know how nerve wracking that can be but I'd gladly put up with awkward firsts and more for a guy like Riku.
| LightPhantom742 chapter 1 . 3/10
I'll be honest that until this point I've been a lot like Riku in this story; both bored for no reason and also not content with the world around him, with things as they are. In that pursuit I read more and more fanfiction looking for stuff that is new and fresh. However, I'd be lying if I said this story was either of those things for me.
In truth this was my first Kingdom Hearts fanfiction and the first lengthy fanfiction I'd read as well so it's more of a classic and favorite of mine. I recently decided to break from my boredom to revisit a favorite and leave reviews as well. Despite this being one of my favorite stories I forgot how well written it is as well.
There is so much imagery and description put into it that it becomes real life in every nuanced way possible to depict the norms of high school life with a complex simplicity that just feels right. Maybe even more right than high school was for me; yet you also get all the little details of high school and social structures to a T.
I'm looking forward to seeing the full range of emotions with these two as they interact and develop their relationship into something special, not only for them but me as well.
| Fan.Fiction.Love chapter 20 . 12/7/2013
Sigh ... I loved this story. It was beautifully paced and very well written. Thank you.
| KariRedlock chapter 20 . 9/3/2013
Oh man, oh man D: this was an amazing story! I really love the way you write, and the way you portrayed the characters... This was a really unique take on the Sora/Roxas thing, and I really enjoyed reading it c: This story was full of a lot of emotion, which is what I've been looking for ;u; Thank you for the great read, and keep up the good work!
| Bitchcraft chapter 20 . 8/11/2013
Amazing. Simply flawless. I loved this far too much. I cried, I laughed, I was shocked. All the feels. It was worth it though because this was too good ugh Ill never be over it
| hamistasty chapter 20 . 7/25/2013
Wow. I really wasn't expecting it to end like this. I don't understand why Sora's mom decided to give his dad a second chance after everything they went through together, it didn't seem right to me :( like, why would get character do that? Put her son through that knowing he wouldn't ever be able to see them together?! Very weird, and sad.
I was really expecting a happier ending :( but this story was so good. Loved every word. Thanks for writing it!
| caledon chapter 20 . 7/17/2013
Beautifully written, very touching and at times heartwrenching. Love the note of hopefulness at the end here, that even though we don't get to see their happily ever after, it's there and it's happening.
| ChibiRealm chapter 20 . 7/5/2013
Your story was so touching! Though it was a bit too detailed for me I still loved it! Great open ending too. I normally don't like that but you put just enough in the end for me to know it was a happy ending (and I could just picture all the flash backs at the end so awesome)
| CKusha chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Absolutely perfect! The plot was so well done and very intricate. The characters very well developed and just such a good read. The ending has me torn on the inside but it is so well written. Seriously amazing job on the story!
| Jenmoon1 chapter 20 . 5/19/2013
wonderful story do thy stay togeter for ever
| SoRikuR0x chapter 20 . 5/6/2013
That. Was. Beautiful. It was kinda sad toward the end, but I see there that you made it that way so the end could be hopeful and full of a future. I'm so glad that Riku and Sora got together and Sora isn't switching with Roxas all the time. It was sad to see Roxas go, but I know that he's still inside Sora like you said. This was an AMAZING intricate detailed story with awesome plot and all! I can't wait to find that book you wrote... man. I gotta go read it now! You're an amazing writer, so keep up the amazing stories!
| SoRikuR0x chapter 13 . 5/5/2013
Roxas is baaaack. Yay. I love Sora, but I wanna see Roxas too...hm...now both Sora and Roxas are going out with Riku. For reals this time?
| SoRikuR0x chapter 12 . 5/5/2013
AWESOME! So i looked up Ocean Avenue by Yellowcard. Love it. On my ipod now. XD
Oi. Finals are so annoying. I still have to prepare for my last test in spanish...it's an oral test. (Imma flunk this so baaaaad.)
But anyway, im happy that it's completed so I don't even need to wait for the updates, but its fun to have updates too...gives me something to look forward to...
Haha. The whole Riku hating ketchup and Sora hating green beans all from DIS Ep 10_1. XD
Love it. :D
| SoRikuR0x chapter 9 . 5/5/2013
Aww. the ending was really cute. I love how Tidus is such an amazing friend to Riku. Wakka's driving scares me. 0.o