Reviews for The Fishing Lure
ShipQueenCandy chapter 1 . 5/9/2017
Aww! This is absoloutly adorable. I love it
Mrs. Nose chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
This one is sooo cute XD
Tropicallight chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
Naruto yamanaka chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
One of the best ones you've written so far. Make a sequel, please?
Pokapoka chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I LOVE this! PLEASE, continue it!
AshandMistyLove chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
cute ficcy!

JasminDragon92 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
i absolutly LOVE this story!
Incognito girl chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
haha that was cute. good job!
kalasad chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
That was cute... Although I could already see the whole plot at the beginning, the way you wrote it didn't make it sound cliche or predictable for me. :)
poplarleaves chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
KYA it's so freaking CUTE! What with the two of them blushing and all...

And the characters don't seem OOC, either. I remember there was this one story I read... but never mind.

I love the part where Dawn realizes what Ash and Brock are talking about. "And Ash, he had that lure. A lure from a girl named Misty. Who lived in Cerulean." She finally connects the dots...

Still, in some places I find that your capitalization/punctuation is lacking... but overall, it's better than the average Pokemon fic. Just try a little more editing.

(btw, thanks for reviewing my story.)
sykilik101 chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Haha, aw, a nice little fic! It seemed like I was sped through the whole thing, though. Just so fast. Like, not much time to enjoy what was happening. Try slowing the pace a little bit more next time. Overall, though, a really good fic. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

Writing: A Passion of the Soul
Lotusnapper chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Brillant, and cute(bar some minor errors), but enjoyable anyways.

petites sorcieres chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Cute and funny I like it!
Alyss Ashworth chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Aw, I think the end was my favorite part!
The biggest ikarishipping Fan chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Awesome story! .

Update soon! :D
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