Reviews for Free Falling
SparksFlyUp1223 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
omg! this is like so pretty! its mad good
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
This is so sad. I started crying half way through the story. I love it though.
Michelle7 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
I am simply in tears right now, Bella just dies! It's so sad! But your stories are always filled with emotion! That makes me happy!
Twilight.Taco chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
ScarletteVamp chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Brilliant.

Bella really is that pathetic to do that!

But,, nice story. Always wanted to see that bitch die.
Dazzled For Eternity chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
OMG! i am crying so hard right now! you are a really good writer, and it's filled with the emotions and thoughts i imagined that bella would have had if she decided to kill herself. i think you should add a chapter where bella comes back as a ghost and weird stuff is happening...
Shamma Azmi chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
I'm truly impressed. I could imagine Bella on that balcony. It was great! Say could you write something else connected to this? Like Edward's reaction to Bella's death?
PrinzessTinkerbell29 chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
It's was good shouldl make a seaqual on who finds her.
PrettyLittlePsycho chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
I love the very last line, "I was finally free."

I really sums it up well. Its a poweful 4 word statement that backs up all of Bella's pain and frustration and hurt. I really did like this.
caz15th chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Beautifully tragic; I loved it! It had a strangely gothic feel to it that slid seamlessly into the story. I adore the final few sentences; brilliant finish!
mskayla chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
That was so sad. I almost started crying... Good job!

Kayla
black burning heart66 chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
depressing, but written really well. i want u to write another, longer story, so i can read that. good work, keep writing!
Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
that was brilliant, very well written and sad.
DelilahTCullen chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
that was super good

but i think it cud have been a little longer

with someone like Angela coming onto the balcony and seeing her and such

maybe telling her No, or please or why and stuff

anyway just an idea

Love it

PEACE Delilah