Reviews for Desperate
XxXBrickwallXxX chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
It made sense. a bit. Continue on. Then maybe it will make more.
Axrat chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
No, it made some sence, but I didn't get all of it... I'll wait until the next chapter to understand it.
Nayphixia chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
it was really good i cant wait for the next chapter
WhiteSaille chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Okay, I'm reviewing... I want you to get to five reviews so we can find out what happens next. I think it made enough sense on its own; it isn't necessary to explain everything in the first chapter. Finding out -why- is a big part of what keeps the reader interested anyway.