Reviews for The Other Empire
N. Harmonik chapter 4 . 2/8/2009
(giggles) Bunnie doesn't speak with an Australian accent, she speaks with a Southern United States accent! Oh well.

I cannot wait until the heroes meet the other villains; this will be fun!
Egg-Zilla chapter 3 . 2/5/2009
This is brillient, funny, and worderfully writen! I can't believe I've never used some of these ideas before; there pure gold. The intier SatAM Robotnik and Ivo switching places is choice, and I do so love the HGTSV entires, their very intresting and informative. Every one is remarkablely in character, espeacially Sonic! I will tell you how insanely hard it is to get him in character. Very few have managed to do so, and my hat's off to you for succeeding!

Also, to note on the preavious chapter, I loved the SWATbot shut down seen, hielarious! My favourite next to Knuckles' brief entrence, I half exspected Rouge to pop up behind him after that little 'impossiable task' sniget. Though I supose this takes place before then, right?

Please do update as soon as possiable, as I am enjoying this story far to much for it to end now!
SXDelta chapter 2 . 10/10/2008
Definitely one of the more interesting concepts that I've seen around here. I've always wondered how modern-day Sonic would cope with the old-school badness of Robotnik, so I can't wait to see how that turns out. The writing style seems fairly solid so far, I'll reserve my judgement on the whole "Aura" energy concept since it's an ongoing thing.
Ape32 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Ooh, I'm liking this idea! Methinks the Segaverse crew is going to get a nasty shock with SatAM Robotnik.. guy's got an evil streak a hundred miles wide after all.

Keep it up!
Pokelad chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
I like it.
Fiber Jar chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
What? Eggman is Eggman in Japan, and Robotnik is the americanized name. But then again, I suppose Robotnik's name also applies to current Japanese games as well. Hm... Well, The paragraph structure, details, and word choice are exemplary; much better than the other garbage on this website. My only complaint is that this seems a little archivic. But that's a matter of personal preference. Alas, I dearly hope that you add more explanations and details, as I am quite confused. Such as who is that "green-clothed man"?

Quit making such a good fanfic, you're making nobodies like me jealous.
Frozen Nitrogen chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Oi! Some of us 'nobodies' have feelings y'know! :P

I thought the 'storybook' way you started it, with HGTSV and "Once upon a time" was great. And if you've really got a systematic timeline classification, then double-well-done! I've tried to do the same thing myself, with... 'limited' success. ;)

What I like: Pseudoscience! I like the fact that you bothered to THINK about how Robotnik's invention works rather than just saying "Chaos control, and he's a genius, there." And the way he continually rubbishes Bocoe and Decoe. True to form, that man.

Ye should be improvin': Did you even mention that the man has a moustache, here? Or what vague colour his crazy crimson lab coat is? NO. Like I said regarding Blaze way back when: everyone already knows, but say it anyway. Helps build character presence!

And while the physics behind the TCCV1 was good, you did pack it all in one big block. I used to do the same, but apparently everyone else hates blocks of technical data (or so they told me). So I'd say chop it up a bit and distribute it around the entire relevant section, if possible.

MOAR CHAPTERS PLZ!
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