Reviews for Smiling Tomorrow
DecemberSecret chapter 1 . 4/20/2003
Ai, funny names, bob and blossom o lol newayz, great job!
Ismini chapter 1 . 11/22/2001
Oooh, a nice fanfic about Jyou's family. First one I see concentrated on his mother too. The 'break up with her' scene was too rushed, though. I liked the ending, and I sure liked Blossom's POV because it develops her character. I think it's closest to Shin's character, and i think Shuu and Jyou look like their dad and Shin to their mom. Although we haven't seen them, it sounds reasonable. A little mistake you have here: Shin is older than Shuu. Other than that, it was a kinda-fluffy but okay fanfic, with nice flashbacks and cute Jyoumi scenes. _