Reviews for My Immortal: The Horror Finally Ends
Silverlight10243 chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Okay so reading this in public has made me unwittingly cackle in laughter, drawing a bunch of weird stares from people around me. Could care less! This is glorious!
CheshireInUnderland chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
"Shivers" my inner perfectionist just went into a madness induced coma. She's okay, I think, shell be fine, this helped, somewhat, but I may need counseling.

I thank you for killing whoever she was, I didn't get her name.
Getsunohimesama chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
A fitting ending to a scarring experience. I am glad that I can now get rid of all the goff stuff I purchased in order to not be flipped off by Enoby. Also, the fact that the cast accepted counseling (in their majority) and no longer feel ashamed to admit that "Yes, we were there." makes me more willing to accept my doctor's advice. MAybe I'll even be allowed to take off the straight jacket and type with my hands once more. Thank you for your precious contribution to the restoration of my mental health.
giles chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
Jessie chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I accidentally read My Immortal when i was searching for a good Draco/OC fanfic... and now...
*traumatized at the fact that someone can actually be so bad at writing and actually speak the english language*
OTL for this.
guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
OMG, I laughed so hard, my mom was looking at me like 'WTF is wrong with you'.
distances chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Lol. I just read part of my immortal, and this story helped me recover from the horror. Ew.
SweetHero chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I laughed throughout this. Whether it was the sarcastic comments added to explain what happened afterward, or the failure of the story itself, this was a very interesting piece. Thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Genius. You've covered all of my shippings. Except Lucius/Snape, but what the hell. That one's not really plausible.

But this is great. Whoo intensive therapy!
JGS39 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I'm ROFL-ing.
Why does Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way's death scene written so much like Voldy's?
Do you ship Drarry? 'Cuz I don't.
Navel means "bellybutton." I found it hilarious but stupid that Neville was misspelled as that.
Severus was never goth. Just saying.
I find it hilarious that Lupin was always spelled as "Loopin" in the stupid story. ALWAYS. And yes, there's a Lumpkin too. It's so stupid, I want to murder Ebony and return xxxmidnitegoffxxx to his original state of non-trolling. If he doesn't troll, he might've gotten a good reputation on the site.
Fred and George were mistaken for Crabbe and Goyle for, like, a million times. And why would they crack morbid jokes? Okay, only Crabby and Goyly would do that, because they're so dumb, it's impossible to like them.
Fun fact: Lupin is probably the only Marauder who has ever referred to Snape by his first name, Severus. (Sirius and James's "Snivellus" or "Snivelly" doesn't count. AT ALL.)
Lucian sounds very...39 clues-ish. Get it?
Hi welcome to Denny's chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Pfft... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Bloody brilliant! This was perfect!

I love you in a completely platonic fashion!

Ahem... Anyway, I used Ebony in my story, "The Tournament of Madness", where she does what she does best; saying stupid things while people stare at her funny.

And yes, I did credit you. Even if I forgot your user name.
Lily chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Dude, I love u (l) :P
accountless person chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
HAHAHAHAHA! I unfortunately read "My Immortal", and lost my 'fanfiction innocence'. Love how you put everyone right again.
Finnish Muggle chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I'm SO glad the characters recovered from their horrible fates in the "goffic" hands of XXXbloodyrists666XXX! Well, everyone except poor Voldemort. :( At least his name won't be misspelled any longer.

One of the most amusing things about My Immortal is/was the author confusing steaks with stakes. Being killed by 200kg steak is far from being even remotely dignified way to die.

Then again, since when has "Enoby" been nothing more than the worst Mary-Sue in the history of (Harry Potter) fanfiction? xD
Ramen Pizza Teacup chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
"OMFG STEAK!111", "NUUUUUUUUUUUUU RAW MEET PRODUX! DEY BURN! DEY BURN!" & 'Ebyon wuz so soxy she cud get any1' made me laugh SO DAMN MUCH.

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