Reviews for My Happy Ending
Nuriko chapter 7 . 10/30/2008
Hi there, what i mean is the child is kurenai's child.. Fuuko take care of the child, and she don't tell kurenai whose child is that.. When will the yukari girl leave tokiya? I can't wait for it.. Haha.. By the way your story is good as always.. Keep up the good work.. I can give you my number if you want but promise me don't tell it to anybody i don't know.. Kay? Ja mata ne..
Nuriko chapter 7 . 10/30/2008
Hi there, what i mean is the child is kurenai's child.. Fuuko take care of the child, and she don't tell kurenai whose child is that.. When will the yukari girl leave tokiya? I can't wait for it.. Haha.. By the way your story is good as always.. Keep up the good work.. I can give you my number if you want but promise me don't tell it to anybody i don't know.. Kay? Ja mata ne..
satomika chapter 7 . 10/30/2008
ok...

i reviewed so please don't cry...

i don't like people crying because...

ugh...

just never mind...

just don't cry ok?

anyway...

i think it's supposed to be...

his finger bled...

oh anyway...

i like it!

hahahaha!

Tokiya definitely can't resist someone as gorgeous as Fuuko, ne?

heeheeheeheehee...

brown haired girls are so...

evil...

i hope you'd update soon, okay?

i'll be waiting!
satomika chapter 4 . 10/30/2008
yukari...

heeheehee...

i think it means slowly...

hehehe...

sorry for just inventing stuff...

anyway...

how come there's a girlfriend?

wha!

and stupid mi-chan is actually a coward because he just broke the deal!

what a conceited guy!

sleeping in the sofa and all...

plus, the gf is living with them?

did she even ask permission?

muhuhuhuhuhu...

anyway...

what's your native language anyway?

oh yeah...

Tooyama...

is Yukari related to Kintaro Tooyama from Detective School Q?

weeheeheeheehee

by the way...

how come tokiya chose a nerd?

oh well...

they might suit together because they're both nerd...

buahahahahahahahahahaha!

i hope you'd update soon!
Nuriko chapter 6 . 10/29/2008
Hi, i have a request here.. Since i can't make a single fanfiction.. Can you make fuuko lost her memory? And raiha as her nii-san? And kurenai is still alive and has a child? Fuuko save kurenai and the child but she don't tell kurenai its her child until she get all her memory? The child name is up to you.. The child called her nee-chan.. Even raiha didn't know who that child is.. By the way i hate that yukari girl.. I hope that tokiya will broke up with her.. But still your story is still good.. Please continue writing.. And EiRist please continue your fanfic..
Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 5 . 10/17/2008
Well...to say the truth...I really hate the way ur potrayin Fuuko...she is the strong tomboy...who faces things bravely n wid dignity...she wudn't b after a guy like a dog even if she is madlly in love wid him...In short Fuuko is OOC...Otherwise the story is gud...But if Fuuko starts bein herself it wud be really nice...Anyways it's ur story...n so ur wish on how u potray her...

All the best

Update soon.
Eirist chapter 4 . 10/13/2008
i was hoping that it was not his girlfriend. argh! but if the plot calls for it then i'll try to be ok with it *sulks*.

they kissed? i want to wring that girl's neck. don't worry, imagining them kissing to not only breaks my heart but makes me want to commit murder. and that... that girl stayed in Fuuko's apartment? seriously this chapter's making mad. gr...
Eirist chapter 3 . 10/10/2008
ok who's that girl? who is she? who is she?

i'm stupid when it comes to guessing stuffs. don't tell me that the girl is mi-chan's girlfriend? now that'll spice things up. haha! i'm excited to read the next chapters to see what really is the plot of this story. you really improved your writing on this chapter. and you can do descriptions well (how come you think you can't do descriptions?). hehe! i'll wait for chapter 4 ok?
yanagichyan chapter 2 . 10/9/2008
hey there! sorry i didn't review earlier! i tried to but the stupid computer where i worked won't let me review. hahaha!

i agree with Eirist that in the first chapter, it was too brief and too little details. i'm glad you took her advice and the second chapter was much improved. still, details are important so don't neglect them, ok?but you have a really fun way of writing! it's very cute and easy to read. plus, i LOL at the tofuu interaction. their arguments were witty and so adorable. makes me feel so giggly inside.

update soon!
Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 2 . 10/6/2008
Nice chappy...update soon.
Eirist chapter 2 . 10/5/2008
wow! that was fast. chapter was up in a span of 24 hours (or less).

mi-chan living in fuuko's room? definitely a must-read. haha! what kind of situations are you planning for these two? hmm...

don't worry about the descriptions. it's not really a strict rule or something that you need to follow. it just adds some 'oomph' to the story and helps the readers imagine the scenes more clearly, i think. besides, you may not be good at describing things now as you claim, but constant practice might help. and thanks for liking the Stalker *bows her head* :P
Juveniliare chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
its... to short.. Lol! Hei I'm your second reviewer! Or third maybe I dunno. there's only one reviewer in my time being.

Looks like cool. I'm just gonna request for some TooFuu goodness *wink wink*.

Some Angst *shrug*.

Some romance *sneer wide D*

And more TooFuu-ness.

Sorry if my review is not one that satisfy your needs...

Sorry for the typo's too. I'm also not that good at English..

And then, all standard reviewer:

Keep writing! Keep Updating!
Eirist chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
that was quite a good start. :D

thought (i hope you don't mind me saying this), it would've been better if you've placed some descriptions on what the characters were doing while they were speaking/saying this or that. you know, the usual stuffs that lengthens the story. hehe!

but, that's just me. :P i'm looking forward for the next chapter ok?
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