|Reviews for The Window Washer|
| Ae3qe27u chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
I'm assuming this story is abandoned? :(
| avidreadercina chapter 4 . 8/6/2010
Any chance you'll start posting any time soon? I really like your writing and would love to see more.
| ggggggggggggg chapter 4 . 6/27/2010
umm is there a reason you have abandoned your wonderful story? because i like it a lot and i really wish you would continue... :)
| tao chapter 4 . 4/22/2010
wait for it...next Thursday... of which month and year? Is there any chance to read the final chapter? Pretty please? You are great writer, the story is one of the most interesting here, please, just don't drop it like this!
| Silvery Rain chapter 4 . 12/21/2009
I really love your story, it's very interesting and thrilling. I would be so happy if you could finish this story. Please...it's such a great story! )
| Puddles21 chapter 4 . 6/21/2009
I really like the everyday-ness of this story. I think you have written a great story about how Superman could be revealed. I really liked the practical advice Martha gave about getting the bullets out.
I read on your profile that you has some harsh reviews so I just wanted to send a msg that I really liked the story and dont worry the internet is full of crazy people.
| niakbor chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
Please finish this story
I want to see how you end it
| WaffleNinja chapter 3 . 11/16/2008
You have to update, please!
| Jace3 chapter 4 . 11/14/2008
Wow, what a wonderfully done story. Both my husband and I really appreciated the judo part, Martial arts gets too often skewed and over-flourished. Its a fresh of breath air to read someone portraying it with the reality of it. Either you are a practitioner yourself or you are very good and thourough in your reasearch... both are commendable. Yes I know im commenting on last chapter in this one... leaving a good impression you are.
Your characters are well rounded and real in emotion and thoughts. And even though I am wraking my brain trying to think of some constructive criticism to round out the praise I cannot.
Cant wait to read more...
| greensong chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
I hope you update with chapter five soon.
| cap red chapter 4 . 11/7/2008
Oh wow. This story is really good, I'm always looking for stories where someone gets revealed to the whole world (normally with little luck), but this is just amazingly written. I can't wait to see the consequences of what happens.
| WaffleNinja chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
I can't wait!
| Saela chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Waw... Where to begin... I think you started a great story here. I don't know how much longer you plan to make it, but I hope we'll get at least a few more chapters, because it's very well written.
There's suspense and substance in every new chapter and I'm very sorry I only started reading it today, because I would have loved the tense wait for an update after the second or the third chapter :p. The chapters are also quite long, which is another thing I love.
The window washer was a good idea, I don't think many people (for instance, not even Clark himself) ever think about the fact that coming through the roof doesn't mean no one can see you.
The first chapter was a good introduction. You didn't show too much yet, but enough to keep people reading.
What I liked most about the second was the last paragraph about Julian. It was interesting to see what would happen to him, since only 'he simply disappeared, leaving Metropolis forever,' would not have been very informative. For a moment I was scared that was how you were going to finish the story, but fortunately I could see there was a third chapter. (Yeah, I know, it would have been weird to finish the story when it was just beginning, I wasn't thinking very clearly :p). Anyway, it was a beautifull chapter ending.
The third chapter was... waw... Full of action :p. It was very well-written as well, and stayed comprehensible, you knew where everyone was at any moment in time (which isn't always the case with some writers).
The fourth chapter was as good as the others... A little less cliff hanger than the third, I must say, but then again it would be difficult to bring a cliffie in every chapter. Still, I'm wondering if the news room will be able to stay quiet about what happened. Won't it be tempting for these career driven people to hold their tongue about something this big...?
I'm anxiously looking forward to your next chapter!
| KearSeer chapter 4 . 11/1/2008
there's only four chapters. maybe it's my computer but just incase it's not , just thought i'd let you know.
| d chapter 4 . 10/31/2008
All right, I don't know if it's my computer or what, but I can't seem to access chapter five. Fanfiction says that there are only four chapters, so maybe the fifth chapter didn't get posted? Anyways, hopefully I'll get to read it soon!