|Reviews for The Innocent|
| buggyswifter chapter 4 . 11/6/2009
Don't know how I missed this earlier! Great story. I really like the way you chose to give each character their own chapter. Definitely liked bringing in Missouri with Mary, nice touch!
| The Mome Raths Outgrabe chapter 4 . 12/18/2008
Nice very nice
| Eternal Optimist chapter 4 . 10/8/2008
Great story! I loved this chapter!
| Ghostwriter chapter 4 . 10/8/2008
Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| Jessica chapter 4 . 10/8/2008
wow will dean beable to stop sammy wonder what will happen don't let dean hurt sammy add more want to read more thanks
| Ghostwriter chapter 3 . 10/7/2008
Wow. Great job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.
| Jessica chapter 3 . 10/7/2008
wow mary is gone john upset if he knew what mary did what would he think want to read more add more thanks
| Eternal Optimist chapter 2 . 10/7/2008
As sad as it would be I think you should do a chapter where Mary realises that her kids become hunters... like where she realises that her "angel" is her son or where she's dead and watching over them. Just a thought.
| cozmikfaerie chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
episode 3 was amazing, and I totally can see the aftermath going down something like this. Your story answers some questions (and boy do we have questions! Kripke and his writers are evil geniuses!) Great story!