Reviews for pitfalls of perfection
huib chapter 1 . 2/19
frackity frick this is gloroius
HeavenHeaven111 chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
This story is hilarious, Keep writing
limonium chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
i love sakura
and that stay away from gary warning from sasuke
god, i enjoy your works so much
suicune4ever chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
No! They were the only sane ones!
"You. Don't talk to anyone named Gary." The best line ever.
moon strut chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
That was the best parody EVER. Fuck, you are good.
FlamingHooligan chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
hahaha! Oh my gosh that was hilarious. Poor Team 7! :)
OSYH chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Ahh, glad I found this! I honestly hope that people aren't creating Marys and Garys anymore. .

Anyway, awesome fic! :)
Cracker-nin chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Oh oh oh oh- I can't BREATHE.

This is wonderful holy hell I am sobbing.
Corrose chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
LOL. OH CRAP, this is GOLD.

"locked eyes simultaneously with both of them?" (LOL) She might as well be part chameleon too, with eyes and hair that change color with her mood while also ushering storms when she's angry or sad!

Scratch that. That's a unicorn stormbringer, not even a Mary-Sue anymore.
frustrated fireworks chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Ohohoho, ROFL xDD
azurelegance chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
"You. Don't talk to anyone named Gary."

best. line. ever.

Sasusaku 3
MelodysFall chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
THIS. "You. Don't talk to anyone named Gary." Yup, I dislike Mary-Sues, especially if they're an OC. Well, only if they're an OC because have you noticed that Naruto's canonly a gary sue?
wwsans chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Hahaha this just made my day! The ending is a bit sad though. Damn I friggin hate mary-sues. _
skywalker05 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
lol! I think "Underground Empress" is my new favourite Mary Sue moniker.
daed chapter 1 . 9/23/2009 luffs over dramatic Mary-Sue stories like this... haha, but yours was teh awesomenest!

-Epic Bunneh-sama
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