|Reviews for Foreign Language|
| theNewDesire chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
X3 Cute! and a little sad too, but in a really sweet way.
| Shadow Hylian chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
I really loved this poem; you've got Hugo and Dante's personalities just right.
I love the cuteness and angst of this pairing, and I think that this shows through your word choice.
I think that the lines
"You coddled me,
Now I'm your guardian" and "You coddled me,
Now I'm your guardian" are really profound, highlighting the complicated nature of their relationship.
I also really liked the "Maybe there is more to master/puppet" line, as it adds an interesting dynamic to their relationship.
Overall, exellent work! _