Reviews for Foreign Language
theNewDesire chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
X3 Cute! and a little sad too, but in a really sweet way.
Shadow Hylian chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
I really loved this poem; you've got Hugo and Dante's personalities just right.

I love the cuteness and angst of this pairing, and I think that this shows through your word choice.

I think that the lines

"You coddled me,

Now I'm your guardian" and "You coddled me,

Now I'm your guardian" are really profound, highlighting the complicated nature of their relationship.

I also really liked the "Maybe there is more to master/puppet" line, as it adds an interesting dynamic to their relationship.

Overall, exellent work! _