|Reviews for Wake up call|
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/25/2013
He laughed. "Why would I hurt my sister's boyfriend?" He winked and I blushed.- Shouldn't it be 'Brother' instead of 'Boyfriend' 'cos Edward's saying it.
| Guest chapter 17 . 5/25/2013
WHY THE FUCK DID BELLA SAY THAT THEY CAN'T BECOME A FREAKIN' COUPLE!
| DaniLautner chapter 51 . 3/3/2013
The very first thing i did when i found this story was check the reviews to make sure Bella didnt die . So glad she didnt . I really liked this darker Edward. Made for a very great and orginal story. Thanks for writing!
| steph A15 chapter 50 . 11/19/2012
I absolutely Loved this story I am so happy that Bella didn't die in this story.I loved reading this story and I hope there is a sequel.
| jus2read chapter 50 . 8/17/2011
OhMyGodd )) I loved this story... Sooo sweet )) Gorgeous )) Your an amazing author )) I can't believe you want to quit (( Please dont... Onto the sequel
| KimiD chapter 49 . 5/29/2011
Em always the jokester... Good one Rose, lol!
Edward was having a slight problem waking up UNTIL love's magic kiss... that was all it took and her telling him "It was you..." They have been through so much and things are going to be better and I loved in the last chapter where Charlie told Jacob that Bella was happy with Edward don't do anything to try and mess it up, as if he could! I loved when Carlisle walked in and smiled about them being asleep and thinking it was so cute he had to call Esme and tell her, loved that! Good chapter!
| KimiD chapter 48 . 5/29/2011
CDM~ Girl you are soooo funny, too cute~~ I loved your a/n beginning almost as much as I loved this chapter! This is by far one of your best chapters... I was screaming "Where the Hell is Charlie, He should be here by now!" when Dom was beating up Edward. Charlie knew something was going down and he was already making preperations and he was right, Bella gave him the note before 10 even if only a little bit early and he was on the move. It helped that Charlie knew the address, thank goodness... So glad he finally got there to save our hero! we can't lose our Edward now that he's a good guy, even though he really was all the time...he was just in so much pain after all he had seen & heard as a child... this is such an awesome story and I am sooo glad I got to read it!
| KimiD chapter 47 . 5/29/2011
I love David Cook! I had never heard this one before, it was AWESOME! And fit perfectly into this chapter. So, Bella finally told the girls, I knew she was counting them out too soon, now everyone knows and she is amoung friends... Jazz is da bomb! So loyal and true, that should really tell Alice what kind of a good guy he is... stood for what a true friend should be sooo cool. And Rose, wow, I love your Rose she is totally awesome, defending Bella and getting onto Alice, what a friend to have. Alice just doesn't like being thwarted but once she realized what happened she was contrite and sorry, which kinda redeemed her from her attitude... grow up little pixie, grow up!
Edward told her about what happened when he was 6, it that somehow related to these thugs that are pushing his buttons now? What happened to all the money that was his family's money when they died. It does not say he was in foster care so someone/something must have been set up for him to continue living... I know he went to live with C/E when he was 7 but you have said nothing about his fortune. So many mystries still to be solved.
| KimiD chapter 46 . 5/29/2011
Oh crap~ That was not good... It was a strange reaction from the bad guys to back up like they were scared because Bella was ill... could they use that to their advantage (E/B I mean)? Dom & Laurent as creeps! Poor bella with her system overloads... godd chapter, the confrontation was unexpected as your title is aptly named. I think that Bella may be underestimating the girls and their ability to treat her without pity. Still think Bella aught to say something to her dad about Sunday. Cuz you know she wants to keep Edward safe too. Needs some help here for our hero!
| KimiD chapter 45 . 5/29/2011
Since this is a completed story and in the chapter you only have 500 reviews I am thinking your story did better than you thought. Over 1300 reviews is very nicely done by the end of your story. Then of course their is me...I have been reading only your story until I finish before I go back to my regualar reading pattern. Although I have not put your story on my favs be sure that it is on my fav list else where. What I mean is stories that I really like and do not want to get lost on my favs list on ff I email to myself and have it stored on my computer in a special file. The only way I lose that story is one of the writers I have saved pulls the story. But on the email to myself I cut & paste the summary and my comment on any chapters I may have read. It is easier to go throught to check the ones I want to continue with later... Hence you are on that list.
| KimiD chapter 44 . 5/29/2011
Okay CDM~ first of all... you have on your rating "T" so that should be the first indicator that there will Not be lemons. I like lemons as well but sometimes I think it gets in the way of the story. Your story is a good one and I have not missed Anything by not having the lemons. YOur story stands on its own even without the lemons so I think that, that is a good thing. If they want a story with lemons then they should NOT read "T" rated stories, cuz, that means, NO LEMONS. Anyway, just wanted you to know that I like the story just fine as it is written~ KimiD
| KimiD chapter 43 . 5/29/2011
Edward is brilliant with deductions...since Bella was with Him the only other person who would be awake that time of morning would have been Charlie, lol. Smart to move Bella, even though they had not done anything Charlie would Not see it that way. You are not the only one who does not see the original song as a lullaby there are others out there that write for ff that feel the same, so you are not alone! It was still a good scene regardless!
| KimiD chapter 42 . 5/29/2011
Nice sneak peek, hope he comes clean with charlie for bella's sake.
Hope you did well on your tests. Must of since you finished the story, lol!
| KimiD chapter 41 . 5/29/2011
The dates were totally cool and so them... Poor Charlie, home all alone... I think he's kinda gotten used to having them around, LOL
I am a bit confused though, you said that Em did not sign Emmett Swan on the card even though that was his last name so what was his last name on the card Just wondering.
| KimiD chapter 40 . 5/29/2011
Sorry darlin'! That you keep getting bombarded with these things. I got what you were saying about his parents right off... Apparently they were murdered and I THINK it has something to do with these idiots who are the bad guys, why doesn't he go to Charlie and let him know about them and what's going on? Let Charlie handle it, especially since he knows they are scoping out on Bella. If he trully wants to keep her safe, her dad is his best bet.