Reviews for Undone
Jessie chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
This story is ok. Actually, should probably be rated M. Thanks for reading.
Aliya01 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Love, love this story! Continue writing! I guess that Nancy looks the best with Ned, eh?/
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Cool. Excellent.
nan dawson chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
You didn't have to bring their relationship that far! Nancy appearing naked in front of Ned is too unimaginable !
readinghottie16 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
i absolutley loved it
ilsablaine chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
I love this story. I first read it on your website and am so glad you posted it here so I can review it.

It is so sweet, so revealing. I'm glad Nancy is finally realizing Ned has feelings too, and she'd better nurture them or one day she'll turn around and they'll all be gone.

breakaleg27 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Very, Very good! I really liked it! Write more soon! :)
r'n'rb chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
absolutely wonderful. I think this is my favorite Nancy/Ned piece you've written. well done )
nickersoncrazy chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
SweetAngel90 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Amazing as always :)