Reviews for Toothpaste and Light Bulbs
Hannah.books chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
That didnt really go anywhere.
Montara chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
It was depressing but so right. Even he wed for money ... The chances for a pour woman/man to end up marrying a rich one are almost zero, that's why we love to read stories about having a chance to happiness :P

So, as a one-shot I can appreciate it but I like HEA... but maybe Edward and Bella can have their happy ending as a full story, with a lot more chapters to expand the story ... if you want...:)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
sounds good but waaaay more detail cause its just to vague to make anything of the story
cryptthing chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
great 1 shot, but huge potential too it, I would love to see the story fleshed out if you so desired to do it
VampChick76 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
That was depressing and deep. Mostly depresing.
Veronique24 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
WOW!
ShinyObsession chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
You should really, really continue this story. I would really love to find out what happens next, pretty please!
Peaceandunity chapter 2 . 8/15/2009
great job on all of your stories but i wounder greatly what happens next. i know i have no liability to say this since i do the same with my stories but can u please and more chapters?
WhosThat chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Interesting beginning. I think a full story would be great.
Christinahhh51195 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
I think yew should keep going it don't feel like a one shot yew know it's like sumthing is missing and that sumthing you can get in a couple more chapters make t a short story I don't think it could be a 45 chapter inlass yew bring more than one porblem in buh all that shirt the Edward is going thru it should five yew 10 the minium I like it.

Xx~ Chriissy C. £
life23 chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
this is really good please continue!
starlighttauriel chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
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kellee63 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Great story, once again! It was nicely written. I would love if you continued this and expanded on it because there definitely are some unanswered questions in there...!
Zoella De Vil chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
aw!

poor edward!

poor jasper!

poor bella!

loved it!

story? ;P

xxzoxx
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