|Reviews for A Matter of the Heart|
| Kage chapter 16 . 8/19/2015
Yae and Sae are from Fatal Frame. I've heard of the manga before.
Posting from a temp anon here.
| TeeHee chapter 28 . 1/6/2015
OMG! This was what i was looking for ever since i watched KHR! Thank you so much! This is the best story ever! I love this! :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/4/2013
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
Epic . Fangirling moment .
| Nix Whispen chapter 21 . 12/28/2012
Idiot I'm Srry but u frusturate me u brought th
| Genesis chapter 52 . 11/16/2012
Please Make A Sequel. I am very touched bye the ending, and I want to read more if you can.
Keep up the good work, oneday you will be a Famous Writer.
| varistea chapter 52 . 6/15/2011
I finally had time to finish reading this story! I never would have thought of this crossover much less the pairing but I must say that you did a wonderful job with it. I love the Yamamoto Takeshi and Kuchiki Rukia pairing now and I liked both endings.
| ayame028 chapter 52 . 3/1/2011
It really made me cry, love what you did with the letters!
I love this story hope you write more! XD
| Kuchiki Jeanne chapter 52 . 2/22/2011
Ah, it's finally the end. Glad I opened my e-mail again today. :))
I can't remember when I last reviewed already, and what chapter/s it was for. So this entry of mine will just focus on your two endings.
First ending reminded me of the end of the Soul Society arc, where Rukia decided not to return for a while. (Although it's totally different, of course. And this is the canon ending, based on what we know from the preceding chapter.) I don't know what the others think, but I think writing about how everyone coped with our couple's demise was a good start to the chapter, though it felt a little bit clichéd when they 'suddenly' felt familiar reiatsus and all. Maybe you should just have let Takeshi and Rukia surprise the Vongolas and Kuchikis on their own to make the emotions in the reunion a bit stronger. (Okay, so that's me being a drama queen. Enough.) I personally think that the epilogue scene was a bit rushed. Forget about the typical tear-jerking reunion lines; there was no reaction from Hayato on Rukia's return at all - not even an "It's you!" I don't mean any offense or anything, really. It's just that it was really bugging me since a while ago, so I have to mention it. Hope you don't mind...
I personally like the alternate ending better. I like how Rukia's selflessness shone throughout the chapter and into everyone's hearts. In fact, I think that her actions were very in-character, even if it occured in the canon Bleach universe. It made me remember the time when her last wish before being executed was for the higher-ups to see that Ichigo, et al make it back home safely. Though, again, leaving letters before dying was already a bit clichéd, the way the letters were written was truly Rukia-like. As much as I know it would be a bit more amusing if she wrote them in-code (read as "ugly raccoon drawing") as she always did in Bleach, it would have spoiled the chapter's overall mood. I'm just not sure as to what the epilogue here implies. If Rukia has totally been forgotten here, then why did Takeshi say that Ichigo replaced her as Moon Guardian as if it only happened /after/ the ritual and that it was not so all along? And the last line (Thanks... Shirayuki.): does it mean that Shirayuki now lends her powers to Takeshi in his fights, or maybe she has 'replaced' Rukia in his memories and was the Moon Guardian the Vongola knew before the ritual? (Okay, so maybe I was overthinking this. You know what school does to students like me. )All in all, this second ending was more emotional, if not (yet) tear-jerking. But for some reason, this one seemed more appealing to me than the canon ending.
That about does it. Save for the minor errors in grammar, phrasing and word usage, I will not comment on the writing style anymore because I don't want to be repetitive. Congratulations on finishing this story! The fact that you have actually dedicated yourself to completing it despite personal schedules made you earn my respect (actually, even way before), as I have never finished a single multi-chapter story during my whole stay on . (Hahaha, the shame... XD) Keep on writing; don't be like me.
Kudos and God bless!
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 52 . 2/20/2011
| Taeniaea chapter 50 . 2/17/2011
| runningshoes chapter 49 . 12/31/2010
thanks for the great chapter! i cant wait to see what happens next! :D
| Cooked Sashimi chapter 49 . 12/23/2010
welcome back :]
| Nobody of Twilight chapter 48 . 11/5/2010
Awesome chapter. I knew X was Byakuya, now I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Angel of Courage chapter 48 . 11/5/2010
I'm currently very excited for 2 reasons...the first is that you updated...and the second...I WAS RIGHT! Byakuya was really X and the other one was fake!
I'm hoping for a happy ending for Ryuunosuke...sad what happened...and then the scene with Rukia's father was sad too...
Kenpachi wants to train Hibari and will risk his position to do it? Wow...
Keep up the good work!