|Reviews for Byron, Beethoven and Newton's Third Law|
| Byakuchan chapter 3 . 7/9/2013
Interesting story, I like it so far. I know you've completed it a long time ago but I can't help but be a little bothered by the small spelling mistakes. Like it's Sabaku and not Sabuku. It's Uzumaki and not Uzamaki. It's sake (chapter 2 I believe) and not saki, if you're at leat referring to the alcoholic drink Tsunade requested. And well, there's a difference between "your" and "you're". Your is when referring to a beloning, like "your bag". You're is a shorter way of writing "you are", which should explain itself, right? I'm sorry if I sound a little harsh but since I like the story a lot so far it just bugs me when minor things like this interrupt the flow of reading for me, sorry again if I sound too harsh, it's just meant for future reference or something like that :)
| Airy89 chapter 14 . 4/20/2013
Its really really awesone fic
I read fic where similar in first chap...silentz fic
But its not complete
I really like this fic...their chara really awesome too
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/29/2013
Hahahahahahaha! Fucktards! That sounds like its from red vs blue! Love it.
| Ikeda Michiko chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I like this so far c:
| SarCastic HypoCrite chapter 14 . 1/9/2013
I know this is many of years old now, but I just had to leave a review. This is the first story, let alone fanfiction I've read in a long time that has kept me on edge. It has just the right amount of Comedy, and Sasuke playing love Guru to draw a person in. I literally read it all in one night just because it was so good, none of that overly dramatic crap that just makes a person want to cringe. I literally started bawling at the end because of how much passion you put into writing this piece.
All in all, thank you very much for writing this wonderful masterpiece. :) I look forward to reading more of your stories.
| Kyle Ravenborn chapter 14 . 8/4/2012
This as beautiful, absolutely brilliant sempai. I might even try and finish a story for once. I love reading stories like this, written up as you go, ts shows a sort of growth, its something to be proud of. For some reason I can't convince myself to do it though, I guess i'm a bit of a protectionist. I write half a chapter, take a break for a little, write a bit more, see so much difference, and throw the whole thing away, sad huh? If you wana contact me with any tips on how to beat this, please contact me at , or if you just wana chat...not exactly likely though, huh? A busy writer as you are. I'll be watching your work!
| Kyle Ravenborn chapter 11 . 8/4/2012
Yay for aliases! That was awesome! I was thinking I would do a total review at the end, why, cause you are already done, but this couldn't wait. Thing is, at some points, I think you lose some of the characters voices. You describe them well, and you do make their actions accurate, but sometimes the vocabulary is to similar. Also I wish to ask if I can draw it, ht or do a fanfic f a fanfic of a fanfic...lol.
| Fluffy3314 chapter 15 . 7/6/2012
I threw up a little in my mouth when sasuke had to retrieve the song from garaa's pocket.
| FireAndPowder chapter 14 . 3/26/2012
One of my favorites that I have ever read! I loved it!
| Kuma12 chapter 14 . 2/24/2012
I just read the entire story today.
Oh my god it was amazing.
I went into it thinking it would be some stupid cheesiness with smut injected into it (because, if I'm going to be honest, that's a lot of what I come to for).
I'm happy to tell you that this was a GREAT surprise.
The story is beautiful. The characters are well developed and believable. The pacing is perfect. But above all the writing was good enough to carry the story. A good story means nothing if the writing isn't good, and you did a GREAT job in that department.
The story was just heartbreakingly beautiful, and at the end of the last chapter I found myself tearing up a little bit (which caused my friend sitting next to me to look at me weirdly, seeing as I finished reading it, and am currently writing this, during English class).
Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. I'll be looking for more of your work in the future :)
| Haku chapter 15 . 1/4/2012
omg this was amazing i loved the entire thing i just want you to be my garraxnaruto fan fic god it was so adorable i loved how you patrai everyon
| FawkesFyre chapter 15 . 11/8/2011
I had to bite my lip through my entire anthropology class, so I wouldn't cry or laugh. This is a GREAT story :)
| Msdarkangel1993 chapter 8 . 6/23/2011
so far it is verr good! i was happy when you included nightwish as i love them, within temptation too! (actually im currently listening to them now :).) can't wait to read the rest!
| Vaan's-the-Name chapter 14 . 4/18/2011
Such a good story! I really felt all the emotions, and I cried in the end! (very out of character of me) But all in all I LOVED IT!
| Grayy-Sunshiine chapter 15 . 3/21/2011
So, when i read the summary for this story I wasn't really sure what to exspect. I honestly was just passing time. Then, when I read it, it just fuckin' blew me away. The entire time, I was sitting there wishing that you wouldn't do something crappy and they end up not getting together and hate each other or some crap like that. Beleive it or not, there's some really good stories out there that I can't stand to read anymore because of the ending; it ruins the entirety of the story. The ending has alway been one of my favorite parts of the story, mostly because of the little spec of humor and pure happiness that's always there in good stories. I can appreciate stories that have sad endings, but sometimes, it's too much - it ruins everything in the story that you thought to be true. The morals, the happiness, the story itself. If the endings not there its not worth it. And this is one of those stories that accually make you think, whether you meant it like that or not. I think that people make such a big deal about things people can't control. I mean, it's not like they want to be gay or anything. They just are. It's part of who they are, like their who their mother or their father is. You can't change your parents; you can't change that you like guys. So many people get worked up over it for no reason. So what is a guy likes a guy or a girl likes a girl. It's just the same as a guy liking a girl.
I read into this story alot; it kinda speaks to me. Some people may not agree with gays or whatever, but it's a fact you can't change and you did a really really fantastic job of showing it in this. You put a lot of emotion in this and it shows. Feel lucky; I don't normally pull out my philosofical side that often. I can be deep if I want, you just have to give me a reason to be. And oh you did. It was amazing. FANTASTIC. And I will be raving about it to my friends forever. You did something not a lot of people can do and gave it a ending that for once is happy. Just because you're gay doesn't mean you can't get a flippin happy ending in a soceity full of dicks with no real reason to hate someone other than because their different. Uhh, hello, anti-gays, beleive it or not, your plastic face surguries are more against nature than being gay is. What's more against nature than changing the way nature made you? At least gays are being themselves: the way nature made them.
Ahem. I should stop myself from going on a total rant about how their reasons are as stuipd as the fillings in their chests...XD But 'neways...this stole my breath. In so many ways I just can't explain and I wanted to let you know. ;3 ...and I'm being completely and utterly sappy but I really don't care anymore. Keep writing, love. Someday, I'll be the one proofreading your books when you've wrote them. Until then, hun.~