Reviews for Forgotten date
All But Faceless chapter 8 . 4/27/2010
your story is interesting
but
i think it needs to slow down a little
just a suggestion but it's great all the same
and i don't think bella would become edwards girlfriend while still dating jacob or only minutes after he tried to get in her pants
these a my opions
i'm not critising
i wish you the best of luck in future stories
ABF
MISFITREADER chapter 10 . 6/30/2009
aw a promise ring love it and i thought i was gonna be team jake in this one?
MISFITREADER chapter 7 . 6/30/2009
aww poor jake
MISFITREADER chapter 4 . 6/30/2009
wow what an ass he is aww emmet sweet heart jasper kool and calm
Ali Dreamer chapter 11 . 6/28/2009
I'm new and a total Twilight fan and i really like your story. It's different and very intense! I am very excited for more, so please post as soon as possible!

Ali Dreamer
BloodyLittleMinx chapter 10 . 6/17/2009
This was very enjoyable. Obviously quite sensual, and sweet. Very sweet. It's enjoyable how romantic Bella and Edward are together. I don't know what else to say really,

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tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 10 . 4/13/2009
This was a very good chapter I hope Edward is able to keep his promise to Bella I love reading what u put in to your stories when I start to read I can not stop
Curious88 chapter 10 . 4/12/2009
This was good, looking forward to reading more!
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 9 . 4/9/2009
This is a very good chapter and I hope that Jake and her dad will leave her a lone
Sally Sue 1001 chapter 8 . 3/30/2009
love your storykeepup the good work
luvtwilightinl chapter 9 . 3/6/2009
I luv this story is one of my favorites..! Es demasiado buena..! me enkanta..! xD c u around.. bye
CrazyMuser chapter 9 . 1/21/2009
i luved it!

im glad she broke up with jacob!
SNlois Lusi April chapter 9 . 1/21/2009
Oh my god why I didn't find this story before...ouu is so great...i love it..i love this your Edward- I mean all of his sides (the Edward in the changing room, the virgin Edward and now this meadow Edward)it's just something different and I love it...wow just wow can't find another words for that.

please update soon or I'll die

Edward rocks!...Jacob can go to the..(well wherever he wants-but surely far and far away from Bella and Ed :D:D:D)

thanks
Curious88 chapter 9 . 1/20/2009
Aww the end was cute! update soon.
BloodyLittleMinx chapter 9 . 1/20/2009
This was a fairly decent chapter, I thought it was pretty funny that Charlie got into it.

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