|Reviews for Red Sky: The Octopus' Return|
| Morgomir chapter 10 . 5/26/2010
Great sequel. Keep up the good work.
| MechaUltimaZero chapter 10 . 3/11/2009
I wouldn't have written the wedding either, dude.
| MechaUltimaZero chapter 9 . 3/11/2009
Ooh, nice quote at the end there. Mind if I use it every now and then? And having Connors pretty much beg Octavius to kill him if the Lizard ever reemerged...
I look forward to the sequel.
| braindamage-1990 chapter 8 . 1/26/2009
I read it even with headache... meh.. I can't really say anything cuz of that damn headache.. I can't think straight... I'll get back to you...
| braindamage-1990 chapter 4 . 12/16/2008
The time difference is actually 8 hours.
While this chapter definitly doesn't lack any action, I kinda miss some details... XD what about describing some things a little closer than just telling what they do or say, while there sure is a lot of action it gets boring to read if you only tell their actions but never their surroundings or mannerisms. Just saying... XD
Anyway, I'd love to read the next chapter soon.
| braindamage-1990 chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
Yay finally Doctor Octopus is back! muahahaa!
but it's a bit weird that Curt can already control it when there was not even a mention of controlling it in the previous chapter.. that's going a little bit too fast for me on the development of Curt.. not that I mind, more Doctor Octopus time, but I think for the sake of the story you should at least mention something about controlling it in the first place before jumping right in and saying he's already capable of that...especially since it's just been a few days. XD
But I love the story, more butt kicking please!
| braindamage-1990 chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
That was a lame romantic scene! :P now what? You gonna kick my butt here in Germany? I doubt it although I would be really happy if you come here, even for the sole purpose of kicking my butt.
but to the chapter... I want more Doctor Octopus action! Damnit!