Reviews for Take One for the Team
kinsano chapter 12 . 9/25/2012
Oh Charlie, tsk tsk. But how funny (in a traumatic way, of course) is the visual of Edward clutching a pillow to his crotch looking scared enough to piss himself. Until Charlie's brain disengages from his mouth and he starts spouting all of his nonsense! Did he really think that they'd say "uh, okay" to not seeing each other again? And as for kicking her out of the house, he's going to be very sorry when his brain starts working again-his lack of unconditional love a parent is supposed to have for their child will be difficult to forgive and IMPOSSIBLE to forget!
kinsano chapter 10 . 9/25/2012
That was priceless! To me, there is nothing sexier than a man who is not ashamed of his feelings. Confidence is sexy.
kinsano chapter 9 . 9/25/2012
Awww, it was so sweet of Edward! I want an Edward!
kinsano chapter 8 . 9/25/2012
This scene was too improbable to work for me. Under the lab table in the dark I can see being possible, but there was no way the bj under Charlie's could have! First, no one has a floor-length tablecloth on their everyday kitchen table. Second, with kitchen lighting and 99.99% of table styles, a floor-length tablecloth would be the only kind that would work. Third, no way Charlie wouldn't see the motion of Edward's arm as he guided Bella's head and think Edward wasn't spanking the monkey while he was talking about his daughter.
kinsano chapter 7 . 9/25/2012
Hey, don't worry, it was hot! Besides, it would be hypocritical to not like it-I mean what is reading erotica or watching porn if not voyeurism?
kinsano chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
Planned Parenthood is an AWESOME organization and there should be one in every town-big and small-in this country. (I'm a former volunteer) And it's a good thing to teach people about birth control because there are so many people out there who have no clue how their own bodies work and how pregnancy happens. Even older people! Case in point: that ignorant senator who believes a woman can't get pregnant if she is raped. Seriously, I am not making this shit up! How does someone that stupid get elected to public office in the first place? Anyway, maybe it's just me, but a sex scene without birth control, or a conversation about it before the action, just ruins it for me! I noticed there was no mention in All Work And No Play, and it did irk me, but I stopped mentioning it to authors after getting a lot of defensive replies. But since you brought the subject up, I thought I'd give you my two cents worth on the subject!
twilightsagaobsessed91 chapter 18 . 9/22/2012
awww such a great story
quisha1991 chapter 18 . 6/24/2012
Awe, everyone gets their happy ending
quisha1991 chapter 17 . 6/24/2012
What a way to finish... I like it!
quisha1991 chapter 16 . 6/24/2012
Edward gets better at this sex thing every time
quisha1991 chapter 15 . 6/24/2012
Let's see how this plays out
quisha1991 chapter 14 . 6/24/2012
For a second there I thought that we had lost Edward
quisha1991 chapter 13 . 6/21/2012
They have an apartment! YAY
quisha1991 chapter 12 . 6/21/2012
Why Charlie gotta be a bitch... Ugh and I was beginning to like him... I understand why he's mad but dang, kicking her out seems a little harsh
quisha1991 chapter 11 . 6/21/2012
I knew it was gone happen... DAMNIT!
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