Reviews for Take One for the Team
hit-the-duckies chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
Yay! You gave Edward a condom! I hate reading lemons where no one uses a condom! I know it doesn't matter in a freakin fanfic, but it bothers me every time! thank you!

story alert time!
krissf chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
Bring on the dirty talking Edward I say!woo hoo
pippapear chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
Nicely done - it was good they weren't like porn stars, but hesistant yet determined and hungry.

Looking forward to the future chapters!

Mediana chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
Yes, we like dirty Edward. Bring him on :)
grtchn chapter 2 . 10/12/2008

And I had my gall bladder removed about a year ago. I know how you feel. But having that thing removed is a million times better than the pain of the gall stones. I was so happy when they took mine out. I dealt with the pain of gall stones for nearly two an idiot. My surgeon said I was one of the worst cases he'd ever seen. :/

Dirty talking Edward makes me so hot. PLEASE do it!
Alejandra111 chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
take a break chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
they will be together right? the have to. great job can't wait to see what happens
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
Yummy lemony deliciousness. And DTE can come out and play any time he wants. God knows if it was anytime "I" wanted, poor bugger would never leave!

This was fabulous! Thank you for this one. And am looking very forward to future updates ;)
JenMar91 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
This is really good! I love it and I can't wait for more!

~ Jennie Marie
krissf chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
looking forward to the next chapter
TheCullensareAwesome chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Alejandra111 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
aw! I want to know whats going to happen next! OMG! D
kellilly chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
i cant wait for the rest
take a break chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
good job i like the story so far, you have a good storyline and actually lay some foundations fro future chapters. can't wait to read what comes next.
felicia lauren chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
cant wait to read the next chapter
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