Reviews for Fault Lines
hills chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
ugh, i hate how much i love your work
RavenWeavesTales chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Wicked story! Whump and snark;two of my fave qualitites in fics. hehe This was a well thought out and well written tale. You pegged both characters just right with their mannerisms and snark. *grins* At least McKay had a go as a Rodney kabob. lol I always enjoy reading your fics and this one was no exception. Your use of humor in your fics sets them apart from other fic writers. Great job. Well done. Cheers! }:O

Raven
Irlandaise chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Nice piece of fiction. I read one of your stories for the first time the other day, and I must confess that I had to read all of your SGA fics after that. I really like your writing style, and how you deal with characterization.
ithilgalad75 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Loved this one. You always have the right amount of humour to your stories, some of the dialogue had me laughing outloud! I love how you write Rodney and John, very realistic. The aftereffects were very well done, touchy without being mushy. Great story, thanks!
Neellok chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Great story. You had good characterization, made me panick when Rodney got impaled instead of John. You very funny jokes, I enjoyed it very much.

Have you ever written a John gets injured story? I've been trying to find a well written one, but I've not had any luck. Most people only injure Rodney.

Twiny
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Good story!
x Varda x chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
That was cool! Lots of John/Rodney banter... lots and lots! Most of it was very funny too :) Excellent whump for Rodney too
Fandomatic chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Beautiful friendship story with a wonderfully scripted dance between these two characters! Loved the physical actions reflected in the verbal sparring. Great way to underline angst. Count me a FAN!
Silverthreads chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Excellent in all ways.
Dr. Scott chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Excellent ansgty and frienship fic!
godsdaughter77 chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Great story! I really enjoyed reading it! :D
SupernaturalGeek chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
That was brilliant. You had their voices spot on all the way through and it was touching, exciting, nail biting, and laugh out loud funny at the same time.

Their banter was perfectly in character and really did have me giggling. It's one of my favourite bits about the show and was one of my favourite bits about this story.

Thanks for sharing :)
corneroffandom chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
I read this straight through, loved every bit of it, but now I'm crying. I dunno. I'm just gonna miss SGA once this season ends. Viva la fan fiction, eh?
Cindy Ryan chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
That was probably the best piece of SGA fic I've read in a long time. The characterizations were just wonderful. The dialog brilliant...my fav line was the 'I can multitask'. :)

As a writer I know how hard POV can be and you completely nailed Sheppard.

Fantastic job! :)
SpaceMonkeyGal chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Wow! That was seriously 12 kinds of awesome. Had the perfect balance of snark and angst. You really have a knack for capturing these two characters and their deep friendship. Well done!
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