I highly enjoyed this! Thank you!

ugh, i hate how much i love your work

Wicked story! Whump and snark;two of my fave qualitites in fics. hehe This was a well thought out and well written tale. You pegged both characters just right with their mannerisms and snark. *grins* At least McKay had a go as a Rodney kabob. lol I always enjoy reading your fics and this one was no exception. Your use of humor in your fics sets them apart from other fic writers. Great job. Well done. Cheers! }:O

Raven

Nice piece of fiction. I read one of your stories for the first time the other day, and I must confess that I had to read all of your SGA fics after that. I really like your writing style, and how you deal with characterization.

Loved this one. You always have the right amount of humour to your stories, some of the dialogue had me laughing outloud! I love how you write Rodney and John, very realistic. The aftereffects were very well done, touchy without being mushy. Great story, thanks!

Great story. You had good characterization, made me panick when Rodney got impaled instead of John. You very funny jokes, I enjoyed it very much.

Have you ever written a John gets injured story? I've been trying to find a well written one, but I've not had any luck. Most people only injure Rodney.

~Twiny

Good story!

That was cool! Lots of John/Rodney banter... lots and lots! Most of it was very funny too :) Excellent whump for Rodney too

Beautiful friendship story with a wonderfully scripted dance between these two characters! Loved the physical actions reflected in the verbal sparring. Great way to underline angst. Count me a FAN!

Excellent in all ways.

Excellent ansgty and frienship fic!

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it! :D

That was brilliant. You had their voices spot on all the way through and it was touching, exciting, nail biting, and laugh out loud funny at the same time.

Their banter was perfectly in character and really did have me giggling. It's one of my favourite bits about the show and was one of my favourite bits about this story.

Thanks for sharing :)

I read this straight through, loved every bit of it, but now I'm crying. I dunno. I'm just gonna miss SGA once this season ends. Viva la fan fiction, eh?

That was probably the best piece of SGA fic I've read in a long time. The characterizations were just wonderful. The dialog brilliant...my fav line was the 'I can multitask'. :)

As a writer I know how hard POV can be and you completely nailed Sheppard.

Fantastic job! :)