Reviews for Origins
KoopalingFan chapter 7 . 1/22/2012
that was awesome! *Claps hands* People should make a movie about this. I was shocked when I found out that Wolf was Alex's brother.
Moon clone chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
I'd like to know the original ending please!

Anyay this story is interesting, since there isn't some "direct" action except Alex killing everyone, and killing Andrew, but what the heck it's still great anyway!

You should work a bit more on the spelling sometimes I'm confused because of a sentence and it kind of breaks the story.

That's all I found it interesting the alternate Fox past it's the first time I've read something like this!
starfoxluver chapter 7 . 11/18/2008
Wow! Wolf survives n were did Krystal go? I bet she was still on Sauria! lol! Cant wait 4 the sequal! Umm...btw you had a few punctuation mistakes.
Time Turned Fragile chapter 6 . 11/16/2008
This is in fact a good story, but i noticed a few mistakes. You have some punctuation in the wrong places, and, in some cases no punctuation at all. Some words were placed in wrong spots, placed where it was unnecessary, and some words were misspelled. This is in fact, a really good story with a solid plot. My advice would be to add more detail and fix up those few errors

Chimerical Knave chapter 3 . 11/8/2008
Yes I liked it...I was all like "AW" at the Christmas scene. and then I sort of ALMOST teared up at the part about Vixy dying.

So sad...


Best Wishes,

Chimerical Knave chapter 2 . 11/8/2008 Krystal doesn't even show up in this one?

Even after Fox rescued dinosaur planet Krystal doesn't take any part in this? WHY! Dinosaur planet was all about Krystal, dur.

Well anyways, good chapter, oh I wonder what will happen now that Alex knows Wolf is his REAL brother?

Best Wishes,

Chimerical Knave chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
using starfoxluver's character are you, eh? well I've got no biggies with that.

Nice lil chapter.

Best Wishes,

starfoxluver chapter 4 . 11/1/2008
Hmm...I hope Alex n Fox will be able 2 help Wolf! Great chapter!
starfoxluver chapter 3 . 10/23/2008
Awesome job! I really loved all the flashbacks 2 tell us what happened during their childhood! N Im glad Fox accepted the fact Wolf is really Alex's brother! But I need 2 know how the team will take it! w
starfoxluver chapter 2 . 10/13/2008
Woah! Wolf is Alex's brother! Interesting...i wonder how Fox will take it! Im hoping not 2 bad, of coarse this also means Fox is Wolf's brother 2!
starfoxluver chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
I like this story! u outdone urself! ...strange in my fan fickle Fox was 8 when Vixy was killed in a car bombing...but wat r the odds that u put Vixy's death in the next chapter (or the chapter after that)