Reviews for LuLu
sennyo-chan chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
please update this soon. it's really good!
Kazuki556 chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Great start.
Jaricchi chapter 1 . 10/13/2008

KnightOfLelouch chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
the story is good and sad you need to finish it
Electric Eclectic chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
This fic is pretty good, it just needs some revision that's all. But other than that, good start.
schia kepanasan chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
although i love the gentle suzaku, but i love the sadistic violent suzaku too XD XD XD

continue it please, i'd like to see how it's going XD
Lifewielder chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
OMG. That IS a strong way to start a story.

The story is formed well and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Niingx chapter 1 . 10/8/2008

Please do continue

suzakululu ish
omitchi chapter 1 . 10/8/2008

i never expected that lulu become like that~

i'm a bit surprised also that rolo cooperate with suzu to capture lulu...

i wonder what will happen in the next chapter...

update soon ok...
Kasandwich chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
ohh i like more please
Senorita Lucha 777 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Morningstar Glory chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
It's good, twisted, but good. It's a promising start. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes through. Do you need a beta? I'd be happy to help you out, just send me a private message.

Keep writing!
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