Reviews for To Build of Shattered Pieces
reader713 chapter 2 . 6/28/2018
If Sho is Lancelot. Kyoko is Elaine and showbiz is Guinevere.
lashun316 chapter 5 . 9/29/2017
You did make me giggle..lol What is the vending machine going to do anyway?
ktoll9 chapter 2 . 3/10/2017
OMG! I loved this one! Great job. 8)
rrrrRANDOMmm chapter 6 . 9/6/2016
I think this chapter beautifully exemplifies how I think Lory would react and how I expected Kyoto's mother to be like. Lovely chapter :)
Guest chapter 2 . 4/26/2015
OH SNAP I CANT GET OVER THIS CHAPTER. Wonderfully executed.
Ebzenka chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
I read it again after some time, and you know, it's still freakin' awesome piece of work.
Danger All Around chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
That
was
A-freakin-dorable
Thank you for writing that.
It made my day.
Danger All Around chapter 4 . 7/6/2013
Ooh, author-san (Didn't bother to read your username yet) is evil...
I like author-san now. :)
Danger All Around chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
That was brilliant, amazing, fanom- phenom- oh forget the last one.
It was thought provoking, it was cruel but somehow unlike many other stories: It didn't make me sad or angry.
Not because it was poorly written but because I was to lost in my own thoughts to even realise that in that moment, I still had emotions.
And looking back,
I'm not sure I did.
Danger All Around chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
... I... I, just... I...
KYAA!
Sorry fangirl scream, couldn't hold it in any longer.
This gave me an idea. I won't forget to credit you for the insperation. :)
mountainelements chapter 6 . 3/17/2013
Your portrayal of Saena is really good and logical. Poor Kyoko and Lory. Ren's explanation of Kyoko to Sho is also really good.
somefan chapter 6 . 2/24/2013
I love it how you explain some details about your fanfics. And because of that, it helped me understand and appreciate the stories more.

Thanks, I really had a good time reading this series of one shots.
somefan chapter 2 . 2/24/2013
This one's great. I really, really like it. I'm glad I tried to read it. I'm looking forward to reading stories as good as this one in the next chapters.
somefan chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Wow! That's a good one.
katdemon1895 chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
absolutely wow, this was positively brilliant, having Saena being such an antithesis of Lory that they honestly can't truly deal with each other and then the way she was so willing to just sell Kyoko like that, just wow, and Kyoko's reaction, completely, perfectly in character, which breaks my heart but really her reaction was so absoluttely perfect, and poor lory being faced with that! at least now he has a better understanding of why Kyoko's a member of the LoveMe section, but hey, now that Lory is Kyoko's guardian then technically doesn't that really make her and Maria related? at least on paper? I bet Maria will be overjoyed to have her big sister be an actual part of the family, and Lory could someday tease Ren about having to apply to him for Kyoko's hand someday
absolutely brilliant ficlet, well done
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