Reviews for Practice makes progress
Mikorio chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
It went a bit astray in the middle with that lime, but I loved it. The tsundere hime with no frenching experience is something I could TOTALLY see happenning in the series.

LOVE!
Lo-lo chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Talk about hilarious. Primal male instincts, eh? It was about time that'd er 'happen.'
sakR9 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Ah! Sorry! Your summary was written perfectly T_T

Just needs more description to show that your oneshot has susbstance _
sakR9 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
I thought this would be a really bad fanfic...sorry, but there weren't any capital letters in the summary.

But omg it was so good! And very well written! I'm impressed.

Thanks for the oneshot o, even though Alto should have done that more in the anime
redskyy chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
You have Alto and Sheryl down perfectly. I love it!
glowie chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
LOL! Finally an Alto I could love. Ahh... if only the Alto in the anime is even HALF of this... sigh... poor anime-Sheryl. :P