|Reviews for Kiss The Girl|
| Marin.de.Aguia chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
HUAUHAHUAHUAHUAHUHUA, loved this one... poor Miles, Maya will always be one step foward him (for his luck and hapiness, of course D)
Loved, loved, loved... I'll read all your Miles/Maya fics *-* keep them going, you're awesomeeeee!
Thanks for the laughs and the adorable story! )
| Elagi chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Utterly adorable! You write delightful PW stuff-I especially love your Edgeworth as the focus POV. His observations about the other characters are rude, snooty, and completely heartwarming. Great job with the characters and working up a nice little story; you hit all the right emotions :}
| princessphilomena chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Wow...I really loved this.
I'll admit (first off) that I'm not usually an Edgeworth x Maya fan (if this counts as one), but I still loved this story all the same.
Larry's forged tickets had me laughing, as did the fact the he was forced into a dress. Well, actually, a lot of parts had me smiling :) I think you balanced the humour with the emotional moments perfectly, which I find is a rarity :P So, great job!
And on top of that, I thought your characterizations were flawless. Edgeworth was so Edgeworth, and Larry too. What I really liked was how you gave us a peek at that other side of Maya that people often skim over. Maya's deeper than just the happy-go-lucky burger-loving spirit medium, and it's nice to see her accredited so :)
So, in the end, this was just so good! It made me laugh and gave me that nice feeling I get inside when I read some really good fanfiction
I hope to see you write more soon!
| Hylian Princess chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
This is absolute gold. I loved everything. Your humour was brilliant, the plot was wonderful and your characters' personalities were so accurate. Edgeworth was so well characterised in this and that made it all the more funnier. I can totally picture him cracking a spazz with that face he uses when Wright points out a contradiction. LOL
I think I'm going to remember this fic forever! Absolutely splendiferous!
| SharpCookies chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Pleading Eyes... that was ADORABLE.
I loved it so much, you can't even believe it. It makes my Maya/Edgeworth shipping heart soar like an eagle or... a PHOENIX! *shot'd* And the end... oh the end... xD Maya, you little devil. But that is why Edgewo-I mean everyone loves her.
It was really well-written and sweet. Great job.
| The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Cute beyond words. I haven't read your stuff in ages, but I still love your style, especially here. Edgeworth is so...Edgey. xD The jokes were clever, the plot spot-on, and characterization great.
Great work! A definite fave. :D
| Joyah chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
v. nicely done. hilarious
| Fazzara chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
I absolutely loved this story! It'd make my day - no, my life - if you wrote more of this series, or started another! (: You pairing choice was uncommon but wonderfully written!
| Luv2Game chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
This was extrememly well-written, it had plot, and it also had me laughing out loud. Humor is hard to work into something and still keep it solid, but you did an excellent job. I seriously loved this. Maya and Edgeworth isn't even my preferred pairing, but you made it work for me.
I enjoy the way you wrote Miles. Superior, authoritive, and so naive in love. And your excuse for it is so believeable. He had no childhood, no affection; perfection was his goal, nothing else. You had lovely little serious moments and then just comical, off-handed ones.
Edheworth hoping Maya didn't wrinkle his shirt was gold. The ticket man cowering in fear, and Mile's comment of, "Speak up man!" had me giggling. And the ending was so insanely fitting. I love that song, and now I have even more reasons to enjoy it.
I got a great kick out of this. I'll now end this mini-novel of a review with this: Very nice job.
| Qwoppop chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS HILARIOUS. I really loved it, twas a thing of cuteness XD heehe Maya's crafty isn't she?
| Angst lover chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
ya! That was so adorable! Poor Edgeworth, getting tricked like that. (but it was so silly!) I'm starting to get into this pairing I guess you could say, so it was nice to see some fluff!I like (good) musicals too, so this was really nice! I agree with the whole Disney's love affair with High School Music and such shows like it.
| DragonDancer5150 chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
LOL - this was cute! And well-done. XD Thanks for sharing!
| clowderforce chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Hahahahah! That was so cute and sweet.
The image of Larry in a dress just kills me inside... in a good way.