Reviews for Last Night on Earth
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 3 . 2/17/2010
Oh my!What an ending!Poor Jin,nothing had saved him from dying!Really,i loved it,it was so damn good and emotional!Even with the bed part and all,it wasn't at all dirty or anything,just amazinG!YOU'RE REALLY GOOD AT WRITING!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
wow!Such beautiful style,love the way you wrote their characters!real nice!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
OMG!That was such a turn of events,i mean Jin came back!I was gonna cry reading the first chapoter then i saw that there was more!
Chantal du Lac chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Thanks for posting this. Hm. Jin and Hwoarang. Very unlikely. However, the story was beautiful. I've been striving for a while now to put up a good Tekken story myself, but I have difficulties finding a beta.

PS, I saw a lot of people did not get the part with the drug. It's not obvious, but Jin wanted to make sure Hwoarang would not try to come after him and stop him from continuing with the plan. It of sad. Keep up the good work, there will be plenty of inspiration with the new tekken 6.

Laughter n Lemons chapter 3 . 1/1/2010
Gjah! This is so sad and heartbreaking and soul wrenching and sad and just brilliant. Be proud of yourself, you almost made me cry and I like never cry. Ever. Anyway, I totally love this, cudos on one hell of a fic!
Lil' Miss Spookiness chapter 3 . 11/13/2009
that was a cruel story with a grueling ending! the summary was totally correct!

im kinda sad now

was really confused at the start of chapter 3, but i get it now

wow, that was some engaging writing

love your fics!
thegreymoon chapter 3 . 11/2/2009
Um... let me see if I got this straight... Jin slips Hwoarang and unidentified supstance at the end of the first chapter, after they have sex, which then reacts with the chemicals from the explosion and drives him insane? Why? I don't understand. Why did Jin do that?

From what I can tell, Hwoarang went after Jin to stop him, and got stuck in the explosion, so if Hwoarang had gone through with their plan, he would not have been there! For the unidentified supstance to work, Hwoarang would have to have been in love with Jin, so he only goes insane if this is true? Obviously, if chapter two was Hwoarang's hallucination, then Jin went through with his plan to blow up his family... so why did he also plot to drive Hwoarang insane? Or wasn't that intentional, as you seem to imply from Jin's guilt at the end of the story? If so, then what was the point of the unidentified supstance?

Anyway, setting the confusion aside, I have to say that I liked the story very much, even though chapter two was a cruel, cruel way to tease. I had a huge lump in my throat all the way through chapter one... nothing worse than knowing something is going to have a tragic end, but still being unbearably beautiful and romantic! And I was so happy when I read chapter two, thinking that you changed your mind about the nasty end after all and wrote a happy fic, but then you struck back with chapter thre... evil, evilperson! *cries*

Chapter two was my favourite part of this story, even if it was a hallucination!:(
thegreymoon chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
*goes off to AFF to read this*

If I am going to subject myself to reading a tragedy, then I at least want my damn porn with it!
Tokay chapter 3 . 9/9/2009
I love this story. It was simply amazing. I even went to to read the smut and I was pleasantly surprised with your beautiful writing of the scene. I can almost never find such a vivid, yet ambiguous sex scene. This is simply an amazing story, one of the best I've ever read. The last chapter is still a bit confusing to me, I think I have the gist of it, but if you clear it up for me a little better (spell it out for me hahaha, I want to be sure what happened), it's be lovely. But I definitely enjoyed reading this! Awesome work.
Vanessa Dragunova chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
That was so sad... but beautiful, and has a powerful ending. Love it! :)
JunKing chapter 3 . 4/12/2009
Wow Salysha...that ending was pretty heart wrenching. Now everything makes sense. Damn I can't get over how emotional your writing makes me, only a handful of writer's here have been able to do that. My favorite part was the line you used to conclude the story, because it made me look at Jin in a different way afterwards.

Poor Hwoarang. I also like how you included Baek in the story to visit on his student, it made it all the more real to me. Overall, you did (another) great job and I can't wait to read more from you. You're amazing!
JunKing chapter 2 . 4/12/2009
Finally I'm here to catch up on what I've missed! May I just compliment you again for writing Jin in a way that is likeable to me (you know how I have that dislike for him lol). I'm serious though, whenever I read your stories, I don't mind at all who they are about. Your writing is really good and your characters seem like real people to me.

I liked how you had Jin not be able to go through with the plan, showing that no matter what, his humanity wouldn't allow him to do something so horrible. It was very touching when he came back to Hwoarang, even I myself wanted to give him a hug. So far, I'm really liking this story and I'm moving on to keep catching up!
Fantony chapter 3 . 1/22/2009
Wow! Another great stories of yours!

I've just read this one on that AFF link you posted on your profile (so yeah, i did read the more smutty parts as well, lol)

You really played with my feelings with that one! I felt all sorts of emotions while reading your fic: from empathy to sorrow, from happiness to "hotness"...

The second chapter's twist earned me a foolish smile and the lump I had in my throat at the end of the 1st chapter vanished.

And then that final chapter's twist got me all confused at first, and then I re-read it and it broke my heart! The last lines just left me breathless.

That was beautifully written and very moving. (I haven't read the FF version, only the AFF one, but i'm taking for granted that the only differences are the smutty parts and that the storyline remains the same). And I love how we enter both Jin and Hwoarang's thoughts.

Thank you for posting this!
Thordisx chapter 3 . 12/3/2008
Sorry for my late review Salysha -D

Ay. -mouth dropping~ WAT? Jin slipped da unidentified substance in Hwoarang's drink? uh...i dont quite understand why Jin did that ?

Wait...uh was all being with Kazama in da hotel all in Hwoarang's head from da drug he took?

Ok enough wit da ?s...I luv da ending mostly Jin walking alway from Baek...following his father's footsteps...I tink that was brilliant ending

As always Salysha GREAT story enjoyed da Tragic...
HappyMe-O chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
damn only one revew per chapter lol I also want to Welcome you for the help! Yeah! o.o I foregot to add that before -nods- Good story!
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