Reviews for Princess Anorexia
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
I am crying in real life, But good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
why on earth did you think this was a good idea. my shrivelled, blackened heart is silently mocking me now.(read: im sobbing and my brother is laughing at my misery)
Marsulu chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
I cried ;-; currently crying while typing this review actually. Hold on while I just go get a box of tissues...
loved it chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
I deeply enjoyed this. it was sweet and cute and now i have all these feels D'; also i really liked how you used the word 'raining' it was a nice touch. 3
N1IP chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
...This is the most beautiful thing I have ever read in my entire life. I had to get up and walk away a few times to re-compose myself, honest to god.
Totally Average chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
This story was very sad. It didn't help that my name is Autumn, so I put myself in A's position. That made it even sadder to me.
xMailMattx chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
That was beautiful.

I'm not really sure if there's any other good way to start the review for this story besides letting you know that much. I've been meaning to review this lovely piece for a while so here I go:

The first time I read this I was in tears by the last four days, and sobbing by the last seconds of A's life. It touched me really deep in my heart, it was so emotional and painful and beautifully detailed. The way you characterized B was spot-on, I don't think people realize that he wasn't always totally manic, but a more quiet type of insanity sometimes. And I love that you showed he could love and feel regret. He does have those emotions even though he may not always seem like it, and I think you did a brilliant job making them visable. For A, let me say you bought his character to life for me. I always refer to him as Autumn now ever since I read this. The way you designed him and made his past at Wammy's, emotions, actions, and relationships so tangible was magical for me. I think my heart about broke when B slipped and said L. Poor Autumn. My heart went out to be during the fight though. He was really hurting. And when Autumn died, I think I forgot to breathe for a moment. [Beyond's eerie calmness was a really nice touch, too.] As B would say, I rained for a long time before I took a deep breath to let it all sink in.

This barely does justice to what I was really trying to say but as long as you know you really touched my heart, it will suffice.

Ra'iira The Fiend chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Holy crap, that was REALLY depressing.
RippedIntoPieces chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
That was brilliant.

Are you sure English isn't your first language? If it isn't, I am insanely jealous, you're an amazing writer. This is the best B/A story I have read, and the sad fact is, if B hadn't let himself get swept away by L his 'anorexic princess' and he wasn't so desperate to get close to the man who has no friends then perhaps A wouldn't have even contemplated killing himself.

I liked the use of the word 'raining' instead of 'crying' because it reflected the fact that B doesn't understand humans as well as others, namely A, and he connects the pain that A feels, even if he doesn't realise this, with his own pain. You're right, raining is not the same as crying, but B perhaps doesn't think of it that way, he may not even know what crying is, yes, the scientific facts relating to tear ducts etc, but perhaps he doesn't understand what provokes it.

In the end, L should learn there can only ever be one L, and you shouldn't force people to live up to an unattainable legacy; much like the Death Note, being L's successor can only bring misery and misfortune, Near being the only remotely well off character from Wammy's in the end.

Ah, I've rambled long enough now.

Added to my favourites.

polychloride chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
That was awesome!
Deletethismess chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Quite simply, I loved this. And yeah, I cried twice at the end where he lay A's head on a pillow and when A lost the will to live and blamed L, all because he changed B. T_T

I really loved your story!
DarogaDaae chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Wow... It makes sense...

You know, if B had said something earlier... I don't think A would've died... *curls up in corner* So depressing...

Honestly, I think that if B hadn't been pushed so hard, and called "Backup" to top it off, he would've been just fine...

God.. damn... *severely depressed* Ugh... Beautiful story, but I think it's time for some harmless, MxN fluffiness...
caveat lector chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I'm not quite sure why I haven't reviewed this yet...

Because wow... wow! This is so truly amazing... I can't find any words. Brilliant, fantastic, sad, wonderful, I love this fanfic so much it hurts. Really, this is the most believable B/A-fic I've ever read.

Once again, amazing.
KENZI-CHI chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
i really liked this

especually A's personality cause i can really relate to it alot

it was a nice story

i actually read the whole thing which i don't do alot w/ really long fictions but urs was really good

DigitalSaiyan chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Woah! that was absolutely incredible! it was so sad! I loved it! and I've never read a story that more than just mentioned A before, but I really liked the name you came up with for him. I think thats a perfect characterizaton of A, and B's was right on! total awesomeness! thanks for writing and posting this! .
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