|Reviews for My Sacrifice|
| deniisme chapter 4 . 3/13/2011
I DO like your story. It's a fun read, but I'm a stickler for details. Someone breaks into Bella's room, leaves flowers and NO ONE calls the police. Bella believes it to be the man who tormented her and killed her mother and she doesn't even inform campus security? Edward, EDWARD, who already has vowed to protect her, has the brillant idea to change her locks and that's it? I think you slipped up on this. Overall, again, it is a good read but it's the missing details like this that take away from the realism...
| micamariani chapter 14 . 8/31/2010
One of the best stories I ever read... you're extremely talented.
I enjoy every chapter and what makes me happy is the fact that you didn't split them nor put someone in the middle. They faced the situation together until Bella tried sacrifice herself for him.
| marie1976 chapter 16 . 3/21/2010
that was a good story and i liked it going to read the sequal
| TwiguysObsessed chapter 16 . 3/6/2010
Tis all good. Happy endings Happy Sarah
| FRK921 chapter 16 . 2/18/2010
I thought this was an update...
| mcanary chapter 15 . 1/26/2010
Very good story, i enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you so much for sharing. Now, i am going to your page to see if by chance you have that sequel going. Hope so, wonder if Victoria is in it...lol
| Schemering chapter 15 . 11/28/2009
Your story is incredible! I laughed when Bella pretended that she wanted Emmett and that Rosalie would share him. The fighting scene was descriptive and I could picture it in my head. Your description was amazing and I think your encounter with James was better written that S.M.'s. I love this story and can't wait to see when you post up the sequel. Thank you for letting me go on this reading experience. It was great! D
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 15 . 11/23/2009
Aww, cue happy tears!
Edward is so sweet!
I loved this story hun, but i loved sweetward/soccerwaed/leatherward the most hehe.
You honestly managed to make me petrified of James, he was batshit crazy, a sick motherf*cker, crushing on an 11 year old girl? *shudders*
Awesome story hun! : )
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 14 . 11/23/2009
"Ding, Dong the stalker's dead...!"
Haha, sorry, couldn't resist : )
But YAY! : )
(secretly freaking out about Vicky...!)
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 13 . 11/23/2009
What the hell is she doing angering him?
Poor Edward, i'm still here for you ; p
*quickly goes to next chapter!*
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 12 . 11/23/2009
Aww, their first time was so sweet!
God, i love Edward so much!
HAHA, Alice, Alice, Alice...
Bella, whatever it is you're thinking, just don't!
(bit late considering the story is finished, but meh. lol)
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 11 . 11/23/2009
"why the fuck does that little prick have his hands all over your tits!"
O...kay... Wow, i'm speechless with that one. How the hell does he keep putting these cameras in her room?
I knew Jessica would be the next to go...
Oh god, what is silly Bella planning? Obviously giving herself over to him to save the others in Twilight... : (
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 10 . 11/23/2009
Are you f*cking serious? He just keeps offing people left, right and centre!
And he had a camera in her room! WTF! Your James is giving me goosebumps!
Haha, our Jessica's are the same! Both can't take no for an answer...
Oh My God, i know what I"LL be dreaming of tonight...
Leatherward! *Le sigh* hehe.
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 9 . 11/23/2009
"Just do it!" Hahaha! Oh wow, i LOVE Tommy! He's the perfect little brother!
Aww, they finally said the "L" word! So sweet!
I had the sweetest dreams of soccerward! But after her coming home and finding that note from James, i'm freaking out and pissed off all over again! lol.
| Fates-Love-Queen chapter 8 . 11/22/2009
Oh my gosh, Tommy is SOO gorgeous!
I loved this chapter, as i 3 Charlie so much!
The part where they come home laughing together put a huge smile on my face : )
Aww, who wouldn't love Edward? He's gorgeous!
(I thought that might have been the reason he 'offed' Tanya, but i wasn't sure. it is freaking me out, so i'm going to bed now, lol. I'll finish it tomorrow. No worries hun, i'm honestly really enjoying this! 3 )