Reviews for The Dark Waltz
narutojazz19 chapter 10 . 3/12/2010
I absoulutely LOVED your story(yes soulutely not solutely cause it was soul moving) There was so much detail going on I have no way of actually putting my feelings into words right now. I'm not sure if Titus or the other characters are from a different story, but they were fascinating. Are they from another anime? Or did you create them yourself. Hopefully you have not discontinued either of your stories because I am an avid fan of both.

Keep up the Great work and update me on your status of writing :)

narutojazz19 chapter 6 . 3/11/2010
OMg! I hate Kakashi and Sasuke in this story... I didn't think it was possible to hate them this much. THey are so much different from your San'en story its mind mind boggling. Keep up the great work!
narutojazz19 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
The people that read this story so far must not have been to pulled in since they didn't review. The story is really great so far but It has so much information and depth to it that it might turn some people away.

Great work again.
narutard2point0 chapter 10 . 2/8/2010
i loved this chapter. i cant wait to see what happens to Naruto, sasuke, and the others. you did an amazing job on this chapter. but i have one question, and u did asnwer this i think, but why is Kakashi acting so evil in this thing? i dont get it. i thought kakashi was a good guy, not danzo's lackie O.o when did that happen. lol. but anyway

awesome story, and i cant wait till u undate again. please undate as soon as possible i wanna find out what happens next XD
anoyonmous chapter 8 . 2/8/2010
great chapter. and dont worry abot people not reveiwing as much. this story is pure gold, and let me tell you, that this is one of the best stroies ive evr read
Tofu-Warrior-Clanhead chapter 7 . 2/7/2010
so thats ur plan with kakashi. pretty good cant wait to see what his real purpose is. good job, great abttle. loved it all XD
Tofu-Warrior-Clanhead chapter 5 . 2/7/2010
yet another great chapter . this stroy is coming in very very ncley, cant wait to read more XD
Tofu-Warrior-Clanhead chapter 4 . 2/7/2010
yet, another chapter to not be disappointed in. i must say i really likes the way you pertrayed Sakura in this story. she's finally showing maturity, instead of being an obsessive fangirl. she still is sorta one... just not a patheitc pushover _. and i like how much Naruto as grown, and i also like the fact that you didnt make this fic into a super powerful naruto fic. i odnt generally like those. rather boring after reading a couple of chapters of those. not the case with the story though XD. i absolutly LOVE this story. cant wait to read more of it _
Tofu-Warrior-Clanhead chapter 3 . 2/7/2010
another amazing chapter _. i liked the ending here he played the violin with sakura listening. i wonder though, is naruto going to get together with hinta even though he is a ... well, dont want to spoil it for any one who reads reviews to see about the story, right? XD. great job. keep it up .
Tofu-Warrior-Clanhead chapter 2 . 2/7/2010
awesome chapter once again _, i really liked Naruto's and Kakashi's battle. it showed how kick but Naruto actually is. I can't wait to see Kakashi eat his words on how much of a ninja Naruto really is _, and again, amazing chapter, i look forward to ready more of your work .
Tofu-Warrior-Clanhead chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
i cant beleive your story. it is absolutly amazing. ive never seen anything like this story in the naruto fanfiction base, which is all i really read

at first i didnt know what was going on, but as i followed the story, i caught up with the story when naruto was talking to 'the ghostly voice' in his mindscape

i have to say that out of all of the fanfics ive read, ur's is the absolute best, the only thing i cant beileve is that you only have 28 reveiws, which is real suprising. dont worry though, im favoring the story, you and putting you on my alert list, and telling everybody about you XD, so that you can get more feed back and praise for you story.

but back on topic

i really liked the beginning when you used quotes from albeirt einstien, and wrote out how he would talk. and also the whole thing with the anceints, pure genious. i could never write this good.

you, my friend are a excellent writer, i wouldnt be suprised to read one of your future vooks _

as far as basic reviews go (and i do know that this is not a basic review) keep up the good work. i look forward to reading this story more, and will always reveiw for it , but dont worry, i wont leave such LONG reviews like this one
maliekal tharakan chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
this is amazing! your story is so in-depth, it's amazing. I love how you constructed multiple layers in every chapter. Overall, there's not really anything to criticise. Good job!
Uvi chapter 10 . 1/8/2010
i don't know why your story doesn't have lots of reviews, its a good story.

i just don't understand kakashi. at first i touch that you were just bashing him but it doesn't seem to be the case.

in first wave battle he was defeated but later his comment that he wasn't fighting made me think that he lost on purpose. i can understand why he would do it if it was in controlled situation but it didn't seem to be, or was he just pretending to be unconscious?

oh and i think you should stop nerfing naruto before every important battle. it seems like you find some excuse for naruto to be not as effective as he should me like wrong climate, weights, drugs. i don't believe we have seen naruto fighting at full strength yet.

i engrish bad. sory if mistake.
TooTooRude chapter 10 . 1/7/2010
How in the world does this only have 25 reviews? I'm adding this to community, hopefully you'll have alot more readers as this is really quite good.
buzzbumble chapter 10 . 10/8/2009
I hAVE actually read both of your stories... Maybe this story is to complex for some of the teenagers on FF to follow? If you want some good stories to read , try clicking on my c2 and see if there are some you havn't read yet?
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