Reviews for The Load We Bear
Rin Sessys Girl chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Aw such a bitter ending! I loved your hypothesis on Orihime's stay in that dreary world though. An intriguing out look to it. Such a shame for it to end on such a sad note. Oh well I guess not all endings are rainbows and sun shine, aye?


RSG (A.K.A. The Flamer Killer ~ Will give your flamers hell to pay! XD ~ Also Anonymous Reviewer Kagome with email and Sin Mortis from DA and Fiction Press.)
HetaliaMonster chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
It was really good but I sometimes got confused on who was talking or what they were talking about, such as I didn't get the part about 'carry me/you'... But it was still good! _
sakR9 chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
This was beautiful as well... It seemed very real, had a great soft quality to it. I loved that they only kiss,...:)

Angsty and romantic, thank you?
lalaspice chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
The essence of why I love this pairing was written so beautifully that I am captivated. As different in personalities as Ulquiorra & Orihime were, the chemistry between them was undeniable & positively worked toward the development of both characters and the ending was a perfect finish. This is one of the best I read in a long time and I'm happy to have found it. Thank you for sharing!
Onba chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
I am broken hearted now!

Great fic!
UlquihimeFan chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I really love your stories! Please continue to write more UlquiHime! -
Toph43 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
omg...that was reallyy really really GOOD! was complicated but not too complicated (thankgoodness). :D i liked it.
The Silent Cartographeresse chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Awww...So sad, poor Hime-chan and Ulqui-Chan, you really portrayed the well, making Ulqui a bit more talkative but still in character.

I nearly cried at the last scene, really, an awesome job you made with this fic, I wish you a good luck and keep going like this in your other stories, regardless of which one.
sunlightkisses chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
This was an interesting fic, and an interesting read. There were a few places where I found the the flow of writing to be disconnected, but they were nothing major. There were many, many, many more lovely moments - nice imagery and neat little phrases. The AU factor was particularly intriguing, mainly because of the tweaked characterizations that I honestly don't think could have really worked if this has been completely canon. However, they worked well in this story, and the dialogue between Orihime and Ulquiorra were enlightening.
lookingback7 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
One. Of The. Best.

Thanks so much!
helloheart chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I loved it. It was so realistic, I could see the story play out in my head.
abarai4 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
" I just can't seem to get away from this pairing. "

Me neither.

I really like your writing style - it gives the reader the idea of development, and the passage of time becomes more "visual".

This one is not as sad as your other Ulquihime fanfic, but it's still sad anyway. And awesome.

Waffleness chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
The way you write UlquiorraOrihime is so realistic I could almost imagine it coming true.

I love your stories and I wish there were more but all in all, this one was just too good. Through Endless Sands was another one of my favorites. I haven't found another author who writes this pairing as good as you do!
Felling chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Great-job. I loved that. ~
AlleluiaElizabeth chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I swear when he said "You can't carry me, Orihime." my heart jumped a little. o.o That was such a great line. In fact, a great scene because it wouldn't have had that kind of effect if the lead up hadn't been perfect too.

Really, excellent fic. :)
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