Reviews for The Load We Bear
Teenager chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
beautifully written

i'm so happy that nothing was overdone in this fic. the way that you broke the story into pieces could have been screwed over in so many ways, but you made it work... and it worked so well. and because you wrote everything in separate scenes because i felt like there was a different emotion for each one, all of them leading up to the final sentences.

some of the things you said really had me thinking, which is actually quite unusual for a fanfiction. (not that its a bad thing). they were really interesting to read and it was even better when you left it open, so we could draw our own conclusions.

i'd say this has so be fav'd
pinboo chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I really don't normally review, but there is something too captivating about this story that makes me want to review.

This story is in a way both very simple yet complex. I love it. And I absolutely adore you for keeping the characterization brilliant. Really, this is a very nice fic. A bitter ending, and yet it's still something memorable.

A very nice thing to do -both Ulquiorra and Orihime - with their whole character influence towards each other.

Really, this is a piece. Awesome work.

Thank you for writing!

Perhaps you can do another UlquiOri again?
Axeiru chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
You made me cry. D:

Poor Ulquiorra...and everything that was said in this fic made me use my brain. I actually had to think about every word that was said. Surprisingly, I kinda agree with Ulqui about his views on the human/hollow world(s). :o

*instant fav*
vertically challenged. dang it chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Wow. That was great. I love the theme of carrying the burden, and the present/future, and the uselessness of words that you use throughout the story.
Bishieluver01 chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
That was so sad and emotional in it's own way. Truely a great and beautifully-crafted UlquiHime fic; so much that tears are starting to leak from my eyes. One of the best i've read in fact. I only wish that there were more that were just as unique and gorgeous on this site.
bm631 chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
this is deep. nice work.
Stelaris chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Beautiful, perfect and a little sad. Your skill with words has made this pairing come to life, and rise beyond even the extraordinary. This is THE best Ulqui/Hime I've ever read!
Ongaku Neko chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
That was beautiful. Nicely written and well thought out. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting it XD
Fenik chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
I just finished reading your OrihimexUlquiorra one shot and I really feel like crying. The end was so touching, almost as though it could really happen in the anime. I like your use of descriptives and metaphores - talking about carrying worlds and crystal balls, very effective! XD
xxxScarlet chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
Awesome, love it. That was the best OrixUlqu fic I've read so far.
KoriChi chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Your such a good writer I love this one-shot I'm begining to like this paring more and more. I used to hate orihime but an

ichi/hime fan made me snap out of my hate for her. I can see ichi/hime together but I will never read an ichi/hime fic now this paring ulqu/hime I really love.

I don't hate orihime and even if I can somewhat see ichi/hime together I just hate the paring.
YL chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
This is actually the first OriUlqui story that drew me in. Yah, I'm not big on Ori whoever or Hueco Arc. But their conversations were very interesting. I like it a lot. )
Morning Bleach chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
that was amazing...
CoffeeGyrl chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
A sparse but clear story, I really liked how you shaped them.
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