Reviews for A Moment of Weakness
markmark261 chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Still struggling to remember the episode this relates to (haven't watched Angel in ages), but that didn't turn out to be any problem. Some really nice writing and characterisation; thought it was a great read.

Also refreshingly free of any grammatical errors (although "run down my neck" should probably be "running down my neck") so kudos to you or your beta reader.
TheHoneymoonWasAnAdventure chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
A great story. Very good.
Imzadi chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
I'm surprised no one has written a story about this before-at least not that I know of. I like reading it from Lilah's POV. You have written a powerful and moving story. And you write very well. Excellent!
Taaroko chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Awesome. Perhaps not the wisest choice of reading material for someone about to go to sleep, but still awesome. You did a wonderful job getting inside Lilah's head and creating the very horrible and terrifying atmosphere. I could picture it even when I didn't want to, and it had me cringing.