|Reviews for A Moment of Weakness|
| markmark261 chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Still struggling to remember the episode this relates to (haven't watched Angel in ages), but that didn't turn out to be any problem. Some really nice writing and characterisation; thought it was a great read.
Also refreshingly free of any grammatical errors (although "run down my neck" should probably be "running down my neck") so kudos to you or your beta reader.
| DanaryesIsGoingToBreakTheWheel chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
A great story. Very good.
| Imzadi chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
I'm surprised no one has written a story about this before-at least not that I know of. I like reading it from Lilah's POV. You have written a powerful and moving story. And you write very well. Excellent!
| Taaroko chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Awesome. Perhaps not the wisest choice of reading material for someone about to go to sleep, but still awesome. You did a wonderful job getting inside Lilah's head and creating the very horrible and terrifying atmosphere. I could picture it even when I didn't want to, and it had me cringing.