|Reviews for Love's Betrayal|
| souleatersoulsister chapter 6 . 3/12
Don't listen to the annoying reviewer who cannot even log in to insult you since they are to afraid. I enjoyed your story. The one thing I would suggest though is adding a translation at the end for the parts in French.
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/3
i loved it! It was amazing!
| Raven The Fox chapter 6 . 2/18
Well said. I think it was hilarious, I wouldn't mind seeing this Harry in a more serious like story but do as you will. Its been real.
Rayvin The Fox
| Talia-Naeva chapter 1 . 2/5
I just read the through your story and I agree I don't care for it, but more because I hate parodies. So, if I ever see more of your work, I will still read it, I just won't fav. It *shock*. If I don't like it. Hope you have fun writing and I also agree anonymous reviews suck***.
| C. A. phranasith chapter 6 . 11/12/2013
I for one loved it and for two totally agree. people who have self esteem issues write on too and just one comment like that assholes will ruin any and all dreams for such person. I feel bad for these innocents, but I pity that this fool is such a hippocrite. Anyhoo great story RY
| nouch chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
thanks a lot for your story it was fun to read it!
I really enjoy it :)
| Raven Salazar Potter-Black chapter 6 . 11/5/2013
Dude, you are awesome! I would have totally freaked if anyone gave me a review like that, but you're just like meh, he's an a**, so what. Then, you just type this up, and it's like "I'm going to humiliate and embarrass this random anonymous reviewer because he takes parodies too seriously!" And IT WAS FREAKING AWESOME!
P.S. I'm a bit hyper if you can't tell!
| Lena chapter 2 . 9/24/2013
I'm sorry, but 'Flawless French'?
You do know 'manquer' is a verb and not a noun, it means to miss, not Misses. Furthermore 'avoir raison' is to be right, in the sense of "you're right". What you are looking for is more something like:
Merci Mademoiselle! Je serai présent dans un instant.
I'm not a native French speaker, so I can't guarantee this is flawless.
This just proves that rellying on Google Translate can be a very bad idea.
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
Haha your story's so funny lol. Keep it up
| hptwhhshlover chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
| twinia1 chapter 6 . 9/5/2013
you should make a sequel.
I love to read this kind of stories in between all the serious ones
good job, only the text before a chapter should not be there when you know that even children have access to it.
| Alamis Ark chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
Great story, love your writing and comments! )
| rmiser1994 chapter 6 . 8/7/2013
Very funny fic and agreed has no plot what-so-ever! Still a good read though ;P
| Kai Chen chapter 6 . 7/14/2013
This is awesome and one of the funniest stories ever
| Haruhei chapter 6 . 7/11/2013
It was fun to read, thank you for sharing it. Yes there are mistakes, but it's normal to make mistakes. I'm sorry you got flamed, I'll never understand why people do that. If you are going to criticize you should do it...nicer? Kinder? something like that.