Reviews for For Better Or Worse
Guest chapter 8 . 10/17
Throwing Itachi into the mix at the end was incredibly tacky. He's a grieving widow. You should've never, ever gone there. The love triangle was between Naruto, Sasuke, and now Deidara. We already had Gaara as a satellite character to this huge mess. If you were planning to pull Itachi in just so you could pair the spares with him and Deidara in the end, well that's even tackier.

In general, I found this fic to be rather tasteless. You made Sasuke mess up too much, haven't had him repent properly, and instead of having Naruto and Sasuke working things out in a realistic way, you killed Itachi's wife to force Naruto to move in with them. Then, once Naruto and Sasuke were making some progress, you had a stupid misunderstanding to bury the remaining chances this pairing might've had. What's the point of all this? Just take Sasuke out of the picture, go Naruto-centric with your focus and pair him with Deidara. If you want Sasuke and Naruto to be together, make them work on repairing things in a logical and realistic way. Character development! Don't throw in bad misunderstandings because you don't know what else to do.

Another issue is that Sasuke didn't cheat just because he's selfish, it's because he had pressures in his life he couldn't cope with. The fic hasn't done a thing to address those issues. You're pretending they don't exist just to make Sasuke grovel more. Sasuke addressing his issues IS part of him repenting. He needs to be able to admit he's under too much stress and learn to deal with his stress constructively. And in the cases he can't, he needs to learn how to say no to his family and remove some of the things from his life that are causing him anxiety. See? Character development. Where is it?
Blueberry chapter 8 . 2/27
Please, don't let Naruto end up with Sasuke again. Or if they do end up eventually together - Sasuke better be thanking Naruto every bloody day and treating him like a king. Just don't make it easy for Naruto to take Sasuke back, please. I want Sasuke to burn...with agony. Does that make me sound crazy?! *snort* I juse simply don't like cheaters.
icutkey chapter 8 . 11/5/2015
Owww dear...u make me crying aaall day because of your unfinished ff...I wanna read it till the end huweee... Please finish this one
Guest chapter 8 . 10/21/2015
So it just ends...just like there a continuation...sequal...anything. I feel so empty.
frozenvenus chapter 8 . 4/30/2014
What an intense story had you written...My hands were shaking when I read this...You sir, are a great writer!
I hope to see an update of this story and will continue to hope so...
Good day...:)
IMixDangerousChemicals chapter 8 . 12/23/2013
Astrophel Thracius chapter 8 . 5/30/2013
OMFG! uchihas better be prepared...they're in for one hell of a ride
yaoigirl123355 chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
Please make a new chapter of this please please please I need to know what happens
mercedesmarshall73 chapter 8 . 2/28/2013
Please make a new chapter of this soon please please please
clover71 chapter 8 . 2/24/2013
Is there a chance this fic will be continued and completed? Because I love it and do want to know what will happen in the end.
ruhana.sasunaru chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
i hope you finish this story! i really like this :(
Tralala67 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Omj, I love this story. You really really need to finish this this is really great. You're an awesome writer.
Mana-sensei chapter 8 . 8/26/2012
hehe the baby has the same name as me :)

update soon!
evraalexandrite chapter 8 . 3/24/2012
Well.. this is angst... definitely angst...

And why is it in hiatus?

Are Ok?

I read about ur back surgery, i hope u're getting better..
evraalexandrite chapter 4 . 3/24/2012
Oh My... at first i happy how u make sasuke suffer...

Then you killed Anko to make them an item again? I can't believed it...

Poor Itachi...

Btw this is my first time seeing someone pairing itachi with Anko.

And u know what? I think this fanfic category is angst...
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