Reviews for Betrayed
Guest chapter 6 . 11/21/2015
Hey man you could just use urbun (Spelling?) dictionary or so,ethimg im sure that would heap (Spelling?) :) otherwise great stoorie (Spelling?)
megan chapter 2 . 6/7/2015
Uh... okay the story line is fine, but spelling and errors and bothering me alot.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
You dont ask a question like are percy and annabeth going to get back together then say percabeth ok?
sfg chapter 9 . 11/25/2014
too many mistakes in selling!
ice888cream chapter 10 . 3/2/2014
Ok, many grammar mistakes, but I like your story.
ice888cream chapter 9 . 3/2/2014
K, you asked for spelling.
1Disbelief
2 Stomach
3 Concentrated
:D
TheOriginalPerseus chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
This was to be frank... terrible. I didn't continue reading after chapter 4. If you're not willing to put any effort into plot development or spelling and grammar, then you should stop writing.
Bookwormatbookhaven chapter 9 . 9/27/2013
Suffocating;disbelief;stomach;concentrating
rtothemax chapter 25 . 7/6/2013
worst story ever
bad spelling, grammar
i can find more pleasure reading a oneshot than this
Ordgar1066 chapter 25 . 1/22/2013
Gonna be a sequel
Hermes14345 chapter 25 . 1/22/2013
That sucked
Sapphire Rose chapter 3 . 11/12/2011
Ok, Lol I liked it, but you really need to work on your spelling.
the gamer101 chapter 3 . 7/10/2011
WHAT THE HECK!
i hate it chapter 25 . 5/15/2011
i hate it more than anything IN THE THIS STUPID WORLD!
s chapter 10 . 5/15/2011
Isaid What the hell it should be I Said!
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