Reviews for Here with your Broken Heart
Pseudonym Jareth chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
You had some capitilazation problems, but a good plot. This review is for the many ones you have given me, so I'll be more supportive I guess.. Even though it's a one shot, why is it al on the same page? YOu really need to kinda figure that out. Try and like, put them on separate stories or it's own chapter. The whole thing as a plot is alright.

bsc9999 chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
very sweet. read it in school but couldnt review under the watchful eye of the school librarian. anyways, when i read it, there were like no reveiws. does that mean im tagged?
tater06 chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
I think you should make this into a chapter story. It was so sweet! _
Numbeh 013 chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
hi,nice fic, 1 doubt, how will i know i'm the 1st one?
Pandamunk chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Ee-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e, this is so cute! I likee!

Lol, I've already been tagged, well I asked, but now it's definately official. I'm still working on it.