|Reviews for At the End|
| ellameno chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
aw! :( love it!
| X chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
WOW! I was on the verge of tears! yep, I have a soft spot for these kinds of things!
| TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
aw. sweet. that's all I'm gonna say.
| Garnet Sky chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Clueless loves you too, Sam. He just doesn't know it yet.
| Data Seeker chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
Nice little fanfic. Good narration and a good go into Sam's thoughts.
The wholesome standards are high.
The langauge is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.
I hope this reveiew brightens your day. God bless.
| Soului chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Very nice, it gives a lot more depth to some characters that I think really deserved it, way more than the cartoon format of the show could ever really allow. The only real thing that stuck out in my mind in terms of improvement is that one line where you use the words 'cloud of eternal darkness'. I salute your use of diction, but to me the phrase just seemed a little wordy. I think maybe the word 'shroud' would've worked better there. It would've improved the flow of the sentence, while still showing some sophistication in writing and maintaining the connotations you were going for. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more from you.
| Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Well this seems like the plausible thing to go through Sam's mind during the events of "Reign Storm"
Invader Johnny Signing Off.