|Reviews for Ever Present Past|
| Cicero22 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Great to see you continue this story. I for one have no idea where it is leading so look forward to the next installment with baited breath!
| glenavon chapter 9 . 5/4/2009
I can't wait for the next installment.
| glenavon chapter 8 . 4/25/2009
I do wonder if Grant knew about his sister's survival after the bank fraud or if he only knew after Anna's will came out.
Also, how did Mare get away after her mother was killed?
It might be interesting, even ironic, if Mare has stronger emotional capacity/conscience than her parents did as well as being less egotisical. Hopefully she won't carry herself like a robot (like Daddy did). Also, she seems just a bit too perceptive for a 6 year old.
| glenavon chapter 7 . 4/12/2009
I hope there is another chapter coming soon. I'm dying to know what happens next! :)
| glenavon chapter 7 . 1/6/2009
I like this story very much, I do hope there is more coming.
Also, I hope I don't offend, but the name Mare reminds me of a horse.
I had once thought of the name Clare Avon or Kiera Avon. Does either name appeal to you?
| Silverthreads chapter 5 . 12/5/2008
You really must stop confusing "seized" (meaning "to grab") with "cease" which means "to stop."
Otherwise this is a fascinating story.
| 10001 chapter 7 . 11/6/2008
I reaaly like the way the story develops. Always thought Avon had a paternal streak.
| Chris chapter 2 . 10/9/2008
Great story - wanting more please!