|Reviews for Past, Present, Future|
| Naruby7 chapter 38 . 12/2/2016
Oh. My. Good. Ness. This story was freaking AMAZING! Oh my gosh! I read it all in two days because I couldn't stop reading!
Your writing was excellent, and it didn't drag on or was too fast. It's perfection! Why didn't I find this sooner?! And I love how you made the characters, they're awesome!
My life feels more complete with this! Thank you!
| Smithback chapter 38 . 2/18/2015
adorable... I love it. Dende is so cute... I always liked him...
| GVLuver chapter 38 . 9/14/2014
I'm not into Dende stories that much, but this was an awesome read! Very funny!
| lilpreciousone chapter 38 . 10/27/2013
I loved it. Thanks for writting it.
| CosmosAngel chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
So cute, great fanfiction romance Dende/OC.
| The Imaginatrix chapter 38 . 4/5/2012
I loved this story. Dende is one of my absolute favourite characters. His sweetness and warmth shone out like a perfect summer day, and I took to him from the first time I saw him in the Namek Saga. Hera was an interesting and complex character, and I enjoyed reading her. I would love to see more of this beautiful relationship. And since Kami could have a daughter with a human woman, perhaps there will be little Dendes and Heras in the near future. Thank you again for a beautiful and well-written story.
| AzErTy007 chapter 38 . 1/23/2012
It was a very cute story and I enjoyed reading it very much! Thanks for writing it! ]
| MegaKiraraLover chapter 38 . 8/5/2011
how does this story not have more reviews? it's marvolous! i just got through telling my brother that you should have written romeo and juliet, since your week-in-the-making romance is WAY better than shakespeare's. you managed to capture the only reason why i read stories involving OCs anymore-you can get as creative as you want (such as making someone half-namekian, and having chichi be less annoying than i normally find her, hahaha), yet still have it be believable with your own spin on the universe through the eyes of a character new to everything.
so i guess what i'm trying to say is thanks so much for writing this story. it's the beset DBZ fic i've read in quite some time, and most certainly the best OC-centered story i've read in a while. :)
-MKL, signing out.
"Any sound can shake the air. My voice shakes the heart." -Sho Minamimoto, The World Ends With You (NDS)
| PieAnnamay07 chapter 38 . 1/15/2011
Amazing! This fic was cute. I loved the relationship between Dende and Hera. There aren't many Dende fic's out there, and even fewer of them are well written. I love this! :) I hope to see a sequel... or at least a one shot... continuing this! It's sad to see the end...
You did a great job! Keep it up! :)
| lilpurplebird chapter 38 . 8/10/2010
This has to be the most romantic and most beautiful story I have ever read in my days, and that's a real treat as this kind of love is rare to find in stories. It has a pure, and rather innocent atmosphere about it that made me laugh, cry, and enjoy the entire thing. It's a work of art. And the piano music in the background (of my room) made it all the more complete.
I loved what you did with the characters, and you made Dende even more loveable. Gah, I'm still so giddy thinking about it, heh XD. And I'm craving for more.
I now have the want to lay outside at night on a full moon on my roof while the skies are clear and the stars are bright and just listen. Honestly, that beautiful description of singing stars and everything else about it is what completely captivated me and kept me going. Next to the fact it was a sweet and pure love story.
Excellent work, and I hope you'll make more stories like this.
| Katie Loom chapter 38 . 6/28/2010
I loved it so much...it was a wonderful story and I in joyed it a lot...:)
| DamnBlackHeart chapter 38 . 1/15/2010
When I first found this story I was a little iffy in reading it, in fear that it would be Mary-sue and well crappy. I'm glad to say that this didn't turn out as I expected it to, which makes me happy! It's cute and just a nice story to read about. This is pretty much my first time in reading a Dende x OC fic and it's not bad!
Also, nice reference with the Sauron’s ring of power. XD
| vic90 chapter 38 . 3/2/2009
Hey! I recived your mail sometime ago but I have just read it cause I was busy!
I really think that your fic about DendeOC was amusing because he is really cute!
Maybe you shoud make another fanfic about him!
Im really sorry if you cant understand me because Ìm from Argentina and Im yet learning english.
| theboxfairy chapter 38 . 1/3/2009
Well let me tell you.
That was very far-fetched and Hera was a complete Mary-Sue. You were missing a few points (I don't know if this is what you might call a 'plot hole') and the story was, overall, a bit confusing.
However, after reading this fanfiction, I could only come up with one word to sum it all up: magical.
That was amazing; I've fallen in love with Dende, Gohan and Videl. I've come to like Trunks and Hera, too.
I couldn't get enough of your lovely tale; only wish you wrote about their honeymoon, if you catch my drift.
Your creativity exceeded the boundaries; phenomenal!
Really, I emphasize this! You had the most beautiful ideas; the key, the many worlds (kind of reminded me of Alice in Wonderland), Hera's time predicament and all that good stuff.
I seriously hope you write another fanfiction about Dende, I'll be sure to check out your other stories!
| Fan-of-Insert-Sues chapter 38 . 12/26/2008
It's finished? No!
Ah well, beautiful story. I love romances :) thank you for sharing it!