|Reviews for a street map to liberty city|
| Thisissowrong chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
This stuff makes no sense what so ever you should probably stick to something else because this type of writing certinatley isn't you forte.
This is helpful criticism so please take no offence.
| TangerineTea chapter 5 . 9/30/2011
goddamn this is fantastic
| XXilikecatsXX chapter 5 . 4/14/2011
omgee whats going to happen next!
| What A Lovely Disaster chapter 5 . 12/23/2010
You have to update soon! I love the flow of the story. Boss Yuuko cracks me up. She is quite the badass, though. You write very in character, I was really immersed in the storyline, and was like, "oh no, the 'next' button is broke! Oh, wait, there's just no more yet. :T"
So, definitely keep writing. Please.
| KuroNekoShoujo chapter 5 . 9/13/2010
Wow. That was probably one of the most well-written stories I have ever read on this site. I completely love it. Please update again soon!
| Lolita-mist chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
One of the my most anticipated story! Can't wait to see how this story develops! I must say I'm impressed with the way your characters are potrayed. Especially with Yuko and Watanuki. Right down to the t if I say it myself...
Please do update soon ok? don't let your fans be haunted by how this story would end! lol
Good job so far!
| Lazy Kitty Hyuu chapter 5 . 8/13/2010
OMG this is really really good so far! When i got up to the last part i was like OMG there's no more! I could picture everything that was happening like i was watching an awesome action/romance movie! It's soooooo good. Don't make me wait to long for the next chap. OK? I'm looking forward to it. :3 xD
| Ghost of the Crescent Moon chapter 5 . 8/7/2010
This is brilliant, so glad it's been continued! Love the second person perspective and the complexity of the characters. Can't wait for more :)
| Pandagirl820 chapter 5 . 8/6/2010
I love this... I mean, love this LOVE this! It's so amazing! Great detail, word choice... everything! 5/5, 10/10, AMAZING.
| demon in training chapter 5 . 8/2/2010
fucking rivieting(SP?) got me on the edge of my seat can't wait for more
| blusum chapter 5 . 7/26/2010
some fluff and serious drama all in the same chapter which is awesome and I hope their relationship develops a bit as they go through the problems it seems their about to face
| Catastrophic Monsoon chapter 5 . 7/24/2010
OOOOHHHH shiiiizzzz xD some stuff is gonna go down huh? lol
| Catastrophic Monsoon chapter 4 . 7/24/2010
aww doesnt watanuki see he's suffering? :( well they're both idiots so nevermind xD
| Catastrophic Monsoon chapter 3 . 7/24/2010
ouch :( wrong thing to say watanuki
| Catastrophic Monsoon chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
my heart is pounding just from reading this DX