|Reviews for Rising Sun|
| WolfFreak-185 chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
WOW! COOL! just to let you know her baby died because of beign born prematurly or something sorta like that, not being killed, dont know about the husband though... anyway PLEASE UPDATE!
| April-Cullen chapter 2 . 10/25/2008
I really like reading about Edward and his transformation and afterwards stuff. It might be better if you made the chapters longer.
| breez chapter 6 . 10/20/2008
like the chapter, would the next couple chapters be about esme struggles or will Rosaile come? kthxbi
| breez chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
very nice beginning, i will continue to read ahead, i like it a lot!
| fwuzzfwuzz chapter 4 . 10/13/2008
Good story but you might want to space your paragraphs better. It's a common pet peeve of a lot of readers on and it may be the reason of your low review count. It's hard to weed through a paragraph that's 30-40 sentences. It's just too much of a strain for the eyes.
It maybe good to invest in a Beta or something. Good start up. don't give up!