Reviews for Whiny
Anglo-Chan chapter 1 . 1/3
This was amazing.
"Wo ai ni"
"Whiny"
Oh lord that was just.. Genius.
PandoraMagic chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I'VE LOVE THOS STORY SINCE FOREVER. IT'S SO CUTE. GAWD ICANT DO THIS N
Shiori Yomu chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Oh...Chinese. :) I just read 'wo ai ni' again like what Kairi said and I realised it too...
This is pretty good! :D good job on this!
puruku chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Well this fic is just precious:)
kage kitsune no yami chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Aaawww
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
'Whiny.' Not in creepy way. Just. This is PERFECT. Me.
anonymoosefangirl chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Aw aw AWWWWWWWWWWW. I loved this, no joke And I couldnt stop grinning. And the end, where he's talking to the cleaning lady is hilarious and I laughed at that
Hyperpegasi chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
I was curious what kind of relevence Riku's learning Chinese held, and I was quite pleasantly surprised. I liked the dynamics you had for each of the different couples. )
Ricano chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
awww! it's so cute! you are so creative! i din even connect wo ai ni to whiny before . now to think about it, it's really similar! xD
L'uke-chan chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Cleaner? Hah, so that's how you feel about your readers :DD ! Oooh! We'll get ya! I whiny this story veeeeery much 33 ! AWESOME!
Whimsical Dreamer chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Soooo cuuute! Omg, this is one of the best I've ever read! Haha, now that I think about it, Wo ai ni can sound like whiny! Hahaha! Haha... ha... OH SHIT! I can't believe this is happening! All those time-! Oh yeah, I definitely have to go now. I can't believe this.

You can probably guess...

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KawaiiKilala77 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Haha, so adorable. I love it!
Dan-Dan x chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
That was actually adorable!
teddikins chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
the whiny wo ai ni thing was funy

very cute.
kestrel chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
You may have found it difficult to write them bit was obviously worth the effort. This oneshot is so good and Sora and Riku are perfect. The whole thing just flows so well from one age to the next and you understand that you're following Sora through it all. I loved the ending as well. I didn't quite realise that Sora was talking to someone but then it made sense cos the way its written is how you'd expect him to speak - exactly how he thinks! I loved this and I sincerely hope it's not your last Soriku fic
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