Reviews for Konoha Exiles II: Time Warp
Ryuu842 chapter 20 . 7/22
I liked your first story better, despite the rewrite that Kami did. I was actually pretty disappointed in this story. It was okay, but it lacked a LOT of development. Plus, you skipped scenes and POVs to frequently along with keeping to much focus on Mica. And, why on earth did you give the fox kits to Sakura when they were already bonded to Naruto and Mica? Plus, Sakura can't even understand them.
Marisa chapter 19 . 6/23
im confused... Is Haku canon? Because he keeps on being referred to as a girl. And it's not like I have any beef with homosexuals, it would be hypocritical, but I'm wondering if Haku is a gay male or a straight female. Oh, my pen name is closetgleek45 if you want to answer
travisgames911 chapter 20 . 6/20
you are the best fanfiction writer out there and thank you for the best Naruto Hinata fanfic ever
Telron chapter 20 . 5/6
lol good story
Guest chapter 9 . 4/26
why not let the boys moving to why used to be they mom home lande with they in comerd over it
ScbaStv chapter 20 . 9/29/2014
Damn, another abrupt ending. It's a decent one at least and you do close the story off which I highly appreciate. Amazing story still, just wished it coulda gone on a bit longer but ah well :]
Thanks for writing!
marquis.shax chapter 20 . 9/6/2014
First exiles story was really good but the second while it started off good the last few chapters kind of petered out and made this not so good especially with only a summary ending
Guest chapter 20 . 8/28/2014
That was the worst ending to a major story that I have ever read
Guest chapter 5 . 8/28/2014
My only complaint is that you need to spend more time working your story plan while time skips are acceptable they need to be correctly done
hakon2feb chapter 16 . 8/6/2014
Ok, so Zabuza died and Haku was knocked out... Fun how these things work out in the end :p
Also, the fic is nearing its end(Insert sad face). Too bad, really. Mostly because the mystery with the two foxes will be left unresolved.

hakon2feb chapter 14 . 8/6/2014
Ok, so Tora is infact immortal... Never would have guessed that. I thought they just had a cloning factory at the daimyo's place in case the cat should die during a mission :p
And we are going to wave. It really was too bad that Naruto only brought 100 exploding tags, as i'm sure he would have found good use for the other 900 :p

hakon2feb chapter 11 . 8/6/2014
Ok, so i always wondered why only 3 teams passed the genin test in the manga... Sure they are all main characters, and come from prestigious clans. I mean, konoha is all about the will of fire, so you would think that atleast 1 more team would be able to summon enough teamwork to pass a test. In my mind it's a big waste to fail 7 out of 10 teams when those who fail could be set to do D ranks permanently(untill they shape up).

hakon2feb chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
Ok, so the teams were a surprise. 4 man teams, and team 7 is way strong with 3 medic nin to boot :p
We haven't heard much from those fox pups though... Are they just for decorations?

hakon2feb chapter 9 . 8/6/2014
Ok, so they are all genin now, good for them :)
I've got a feeling about the teams though... My feeling tells me it will be Naruto, Hinata and Kiba, then Mica, Sakura and Shino and last is Ino, Shikamaru, Choji. Call it a gut feeling, but most stories, unless naruto is on the squad has the ino/shika/cho for squad 10.

hakon2feb chapter 8 . 8/6/2014
Ok, so that was cool.
Itachi actually killed his brother this time. Not like he had much choice, since Sasuke had allready killed their mother.
Next, i don't think the seal from the manga was designed to absorb and finally kill the kyuubi. My reason for thinking this is that if that was so, then they would have done so when kyuubi was sealed inside kushina.(Ofcourse that didn't happen in your fic :p )

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