|Reviews for The RunawayChapter 1|
| SilveringBlue chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I would like to inform you that your story violates the rules of . Original fiction is not allowed here; please remove and if wished repost to Fictionpress or Deviantart.
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| Skylover896 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I would really like for you to continue this story! This chapter could use more detail. Try to slow it down a little and introduce the characters one by one. Introduce them as they come into the story.
I have some stories that need more reviews! Go to my profile to learn what I write about and there are also story summaries there. Then, please read one and review! I have one in this category.
| HawkPen chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Nothing to do with Fire Within, it completely murders the English language, and it has effort equivalent to a monkey. I recommend euthanization. For you, not the monkey that wrote this.
| vgmaster831 chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Well, this sounds like a Naruto fanfiction, and are you gonna continue it?