|Reviews for Transformation: Project Legend|
| The RPG Master chapter 35 . 7/19
WHAT?! YOU MEAN THAT MONSTER SCOTTSDALE IS REALLY DANIEL'S FATHER WHO LEFT HIM?! OMG!
| roorookanga chapter 3 . 5/24
Pokemon Gale of DarknessTeam Dark Gale (COINCIDENCE? I THINK NOT :O)
| NandNvg chapter 38 . 5/4
Remember me? I now have an account. I think four years is a long enough hiatus. Please give me some sign of life.
| Drakon chapter 38 . 1/31
Add an umbreon please?
| TheQueen'sknight chapter 11 . 1/23
I hope you update!
| Daniel1122 chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Don't like unfinished stories :(
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/17/2014
At the end of this chapter, I've end up playing the song "Bad Moon Rising" - Mourning Ritual ft. Peter Dreimanis.
So to set the mood.
| Seville chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
Okay. This will sound harsh but, aside from new dawn, I hate every single one of these stories. Quaratine might actually be the worst story I've ever read. It was long, boring, had a bunch of totally pointless characters to waste our time (as is typical with these types of virus stories) and overall just pissed me off. New dawn, strangely enough, I enjoyed. The plot was actually interesting rather then them just walking around and the character (which you actually do have a lot of talent in creating and developing) were all likable.
And then it stopped, to be replaced with this. I don't hate this as much as I hate quarantine but it is definately a close second. Again, pointless characters and sub-plots to waste our time with so much emotional meat tenderising to the soul that I actually began to care less and less about the characters as the story went on. Well, kind of story. It didn't actually start to go anywhere until the last couple of chapters.
As for all the side stories and one-shots. Garbage. Sorry but they just have no reason to exist. The offer us nothing to care about and just waste our time with more characters that end up just being annoying somehow. Especially the one with the lapras and nine tails. Also, you might have inadvertently given away the ending of the while series when you said they don't change back.
Okay, I really hate this series and I've been really ripping into it so I should talk about some of the positives. You are, really really good at creating sand developing your characters. Not kidding, you have some serious talent there. And with new dawn, you've shown that you can actually get a decent storyline and flow going as long as you actually pay attention to it. It's a real shame that these positives are just crushed under the tsunami of awful.
If you didn't think I explained why I don't like these stories properly then PM me and I'll try to get it a bit more constructive.
| Guest chapter 38 . 5/22/2014
You should finish this, I enjoyed reading this.
| Guest chapter 38 . 1/25/2014
Where's the ending! D:
| Guest chapter 38 . 10/30/2013
Please keep going its a wonderful story
| Umbreon lover chapter 25 . 10/21/2013
Oh i almost for got
Molly never realy liked being a human and has always dreamed of flying/running through the sky/grassy medows, with the wind in her feathers/fur and nothing holding her back. So the change is some what welcome. She is very smart and crafty so she could easly find a way out of the chains. When she does she will run and jump as much as her room alows(entei), fly around doing loops and dives and stuff(moltress), or take a nap and dream of flying(ho oh). And when she's in training she compleetly ignorse the pokemon that want to fight her and plays around some times geting the other pokemon to join in.
| Umbreon lover chapter 24 . 10/20/2013
Ok so i have an o.c for you
Personality: socaly ocward, generaly happy, makes the bets of every situation, compasonat, shy, makes life long freinds
Aperence: red hair,gold red eyes, cargo pants, orange shirt, dream catcher neckless
Legendary: ho oh, entei, moltress(in order of most wanted to least wanted but ok with)
Info: ho oh gave molly three feathers wich she has on her neckless. Has a arcinine. Gets v1or 2 b/c when they try to give her the viorus she bites the tube and it breaks causing it to become useless.
Hopes: her and daniel become fond of eachother.
I think thats it so have fun writing her in or not, I don't realy care.
Molly: *wispers* she cares alot.
Me: shut up molly! How do you know what i care about? I just made you!
Molly: my little secret!
Jacky: another o.c? Wow moon, I thought you would stop at 5.
Molly: AAAHHHH! * hides be hind tree*
Me: one, stop calling me moon! Two, I told you she's shy.
Jacky: thats a change moon. All of the others are crazy, insane or have anger problems.
Me: Shut up. I have to go get Molly out from behind that tree.
Jacky: you have fun moon.
How did i randomly get on to one of my o.c arguments again?
(K so I actualy have an acount and Jacky is one of my characters)
| Umbreon lover chapter 12 . 10/19/2013
| Umbreon lover chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
Ong! I found it! I found another poke-transformation story that is good and isn't(finally) rated M! There are soo many its kinda gross...