Reviews for Tell Me Why
AbandonedAccount123 chapter 3 . 1/21/2013
Aw.
AbandonedAccount123 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
Woah, what exactly happened between her and Kai?
AbandonedAccount123 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I like this idea though I've never married either bachelor.
hmgurl4evr chapter 30 . 5/25/2012
This...Is...Too good for words...I basically sobbed so hard through the whole thing. ; I was a mess.

I'm REALLY happy to se story that was absolutely wonderful.

I almost died out of all the fluff.

Please continue with your amazing work

and never give up!

-hmgurl4evr
Mita chapter 22 . 12/14/2010
I like this story a lot but I don't wanna read anymore cause its soooo depressing I love Kai and I don't particularly like Rick and this is just toooooooooooooooo saaaaaaaaaaaaaddddddd ahhhhhhh...btw I started reading this story today and I got it from the vid. Almost Lovers by Harvestmoon something and gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh tis so depressing I think this is almost as if not more depressing as My Sister's Keeper I cry like every time Kai's involved...which is alot...Still I can't deny that this isn't one of the best Harvest Moon stories I've read in a while...Good Job! *Goes off to cry in a dark closet cause Kai can't win Claire back*
Ohtar chapter 30 . 4/7/2010
This is one of the best HM fics I've read in years. :) Keep up the good work!
Nikooru-chan chapter 30 . 1/18/2010
I could leave a long review about how utterly amazing this story was, how I bawled in just about every chapter, how well planned and how well executed it was, but I think I'll just favorite it and let you know that this was fucking AWESOME!
Tsuki Yuiko chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
I love how you convey character's emotions in your stories. The way you dwelve into Claire's conflicting feelings of anger, pain, and loss is dynamic and realistic. I feel like I can picture every scene in my head. I loved the scene when Claire was with baby Lance and she realized he was just like Kai. I love how Rick always comes to Claire's rescue and how deeply he cares for her. The last line was so sweet and it made me smile. This chapter was powerful and you captured Claire's turbulent emotions perfectly! I loved it and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Tsuki Yuiko chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
This chapter was brilliant. I was immeditaly drawn in by the first few sentences. I love how you explained Claire's emotions, it was raw, intense, and powerful-like how she hated the townspeople for pitying her and she didn't want to see her child for fear of seeing her lost love. I loved the clinic scene and I could really feel Claire's panic and fear. *sniffles* I wonder why Kai left? I absolutely love Rick! He is such a wonderful guy and he's been supporting Claire all this time. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Sugar.Sweet.Apples chapter 30 . 9/19/2009
omfg i love this story i read it before i even signed up for fanfiction and i absolutly flipped this is the first harvets moon story i ever read and that what got me hooked i love ur story
Starlit Stranger chapter 18 . 7/3/2009
is there going to be more?

:O
Starlit Stranger chapter 9 . 7/3/2009
FIRST CHAPTER I CRIED!

damn im so emo

And love Kia so that makes it worse...
Starlit Stranger chapter 3 . 7/3/2009
OMG i'm tearing

KIA is such a douche

(Still love him though... :'( )
Starlit Stranger chapter 2 . 7/3/2009
uhh is Kia dead

Or is he just a douche face?
Joshine96fanfiction.net chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
OMG

so sad

I'm kinda writing one like this for Gaara...

I love kia though and in the game i married him and stuff... so this makes me sad...

does kia really mean ocean?
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