|Reviews for Isle Esme|
| WordsCantBringMeDown chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
very well written. i would sugest you coninue with how he was feeling when he found out Bella was prego. lol.
| Kmserenity chapter 2 . 8/9/2009
Wow. Just. Wow.
| LIENA BEAN chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
you should complete isle esme i like it, and i really wish it was in the book but it wasnt .
| princess1996 chapter 2 . 7/28/2009
THAT WAS AWESOME!
YOU DID A REALLY GOOD JOB!
| burning.x.impossibly.x.bright chapter 2 . 7/27/2009
I am so glad I looked on your profile and found this story after reading the other one :D
Yay Isle Esme! I never really wondered how they ended up in the bedroom rather than still in the ocean, but this definitely helped fill it in ;)
I love how your writing is so descriptive and vivid. It makes it really easy to actually imagine, which is what reading is all about. It's like TV in your head haha
You did an amazing job fitting this story in with what happened in Breaking Dawn. I could go on and on describing why I liked it, but I'm gonna put it simply...it was perfect, there's really nothing else I need to say other than mentioning that you did a remarkable job on this :)
| Im Poiosned chapter 2 . 7/27/2009
awesome two shot dude very sweet :)
| lee chapter 2 . 7/23/2009
WOW! That was awesome!- U did a very, very good job- I really enjoyed it & i felt the intense of it as well- After 3 books of building passion- this story (your version), seemed absolutely perfect for the love scene, I think it really captured Edward and his conflict with self, love & self pleasure!
| edward-cullen-maniac22 chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
that was a really good story. i was waiting for someone to write it from edwards point of view. i think you wrote it perfectly. so thank you for writing and i will defenitly read more of your stories!
| Julie chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Very good and entertainning :D! You have a great talent for writing ;)!
| mrs.bookreader cullen chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
omg this story is so beautiful i know i sound so werid omy god this story mad me cry it is so sweet
if you are writting more plz
update soon :)
| theladyingrey42 chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
This is absolutely pitch-perfect. All of Edward's love and reluctance and self-disgust and desire and doubt. Everything the scene should have been.
| glorygirl308 chapter 2 . 7/18/2009
Aww. This was so lovely. I was hoping someone would make a better love scene than in the book. This is incredible really. I'm so glad I found this. Amazing.
| ManasaCullen chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Love it. Its good to hear in Edward's perspective.
| mugglemom08 chapter 2 . 7/10/2009
Just as fabulous as the first chapter.
| mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Oh. My. Word. Edward certainly has a way with words, doesn't he? That was wonderful, beautiful, amazing, fantastic...