|Reviews for Isle Esme|
| Impressed chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
This is good. Unlike all other Isle Esme works, this actually SOUNDS like Edward. I can just see him saying it. Well done!
| Kelsismom chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Just loved it...and Edward's restraint...and the pillows.
Well done! ")
| squibstitcher chapter 2 . 8/24/2009
This was the most well-written and tasteful portrayal of canon I have read thus far in regards to this scene. You have captured the essence and tone flawlessly as though it had been an excerpt all along. I applaud your talent and skill, such eloquent writing. Well done!
| Kelsismom chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Incredible! Amazing! Fantastic!
You've truly brought our Breaking Dawn Edward to life, and have certainly enlightened me with such delightful insight into his thoughts and feelings. I am loving this so far. Your writing is truly impressive and I look forward to reading the second part when I get another quiet moment.
| StarlightSuccubus chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
You know what? I've read this one. It was my first Isle Esme fic.
Loved it BTW. Funny how I read your stories without knowing they where yours hahaha...
B&W I knew though...
Luv ya hard!
| SilverIsabella chapter 2 . 8/17/2009
This has to be the best version of Isle Esme that I have ever read. I thought that this was just fantastic!
| 4everhis91 chapter 2 . 8/15/2009
loved this more than any other "Isle Esme missing parts" I have ever read, but its so sad that Edward has to back to brooding in the morning... come on now Edward ... a few little buises just mean a well played evening :) LOL ... Ok that was TMI ! Anyway I wanted to see if you would consider continuing this little bit until Edward also gets to end on a happy note and excepting that with some practice things only get better :) Bravo!
| 4everhis91 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
OME ! I am so glad I found this story ... it has so much more detail than most and EPOV is my FAV!
| WordsCantBringMeDown chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
very well written. i would sugest you coninue with how he was feeling when he found out Bella was prego. lol.
| Kmserenity chapter 2 . 8/9/2009
Wow. Just. Wow.
| LIENA BEAN chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
you should complete isle esme i like it, and i really wish it was in the book but it wasnt .
| princess1996 chapter 2 . 7/28/2009
THAT WAS AWESOME!
YOU DID A REALLY GOOD JOB!
| burning.x.impossibly.x.bright chapter 2 . 7/27/2009
I am so glad I looked on your profile and found this story after reading the other one :D
Yay Isle Esme! I never really wondered how they ended up in the bedroom rather than still in the ocean, but this definitely helped fill it in ;)
I love how your writing is so descriptive and vivid. It makes it really easy to actually imagine, which is what reading is all about. It's like TV in your head haha
You did an amazing job fitting this story in with what happened in Breaking Dawn. I could go on and on describing why I liked it, but I'm gonna put it simply...it was perfect, there's really nothing else I need to say other than mentioning that you did a remarkable job on this :)
| Im Poiosned chapter 2 . 7/27/2009
awesome two shot dude very sweet :)
| lee chapter 2 . 7/23/2009
WOW! That was awesome!- U did a very, very good job- I really enjoyed it & i felt the intense of it as well- After 3 books of building passion- this story (your version), seemed absolutely perfect for the love scene, I think it really captured Edward and his conflict with self, love & self pleasure!