|Reviews for Isle Esme|
| CoCo1996 chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
Jesus Christ! the guy has GOT to stop berating himself! she didn't get hurt...! ok, i read the book, guilty as charged even though im only twealve, so, i was listening to The Veronica's 'Untouched' yeah, im gonna need a cold shower, great fic!
| Twilight's Sapphire chapter 3 . 3/31/2009
Wow, that was amazing. It was like you caught my imagination when I was reading Breaking Dawn and putting in my thoughts what Stephanie either couldn't or wouldn't write. The funny thing is, I see Robert and Kristen in my mind...such a voyer. But it's like I would almost want them to read this to get the feel what what would be needed if they get around to making the movie of Breaking Dawn.
You captured everything I would want to see or experiance with them on the screen without it being porn.
It was a beautifully written story, Thanks
| laraspain chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Hi Tiffany, thank you so much for sending me the link to your fan fiction. I love hoy swwet and intense your story was. A little sad at the end but we all know what happens next, right?
I plan on reading your other stories as well.
Thank you again forsharing your talet with the rest of the twilighters.
| Petuniac3 chapter 3 . 3/25/2009
all I can say is WOW
| IceTease69 chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
This has got to be the hands down best Isle Esme I have ever read. You captured the need of the characters, the sensuality of their experience, and the concern and restraint Edward needed for them to actually pull this off, all while being SMOKING hot.
Excellent work. Just Wow.
| Juliejuliejulie chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
Wow, that was really, really good. I wrote my own version of the honeymoon, but mine is very different than yours. I think yours is much truer to Edward, that he would be relentless in his fight for control, that every pleasurable feeling would be countered with anxiety or detached concentration. It was frustrating-the constant moving one step forward and two steps back, so much hesitancy!, but I think you totally nailed what Edward would do in this situation. (I'm just too impatient and horned up not to move things along faster.) The slow build was great, and it made for such compelling reading. You captured Bella's patience with him and preserved her innocence (in a way that I didn't). You also addressed the hymen issue really well (although you didn't mention him smelling the tinge of blood I'm sure he would have noticed.) I love how you started the story, explained why Edward chose Isle Esme, and what he was thinking/feeling when he bit the pillows. Wonderful story-I heard about it from the Perv Shack ladies and I'm so glad I got to read it! Thanks!
| SydneyAlice chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
I'm new to this community, but I wanted to let you know that this is absolutely the best fan fic I've read so far. You captured Edward so perfectly! Everything was perfection. I even cried. I look forward to reading your other stories.
| ChestyLaRue413 chapter 3 . 3/19/2009
That was amazing haha
| Pink Ribbon Scars chapter 2 . 3/19/2009
Amazing...just perfectly, amazing. Thank you for bestowing this upon me.
-Pink Ribbon Scars
| The Meaning Of Life chapter 2 . 3/17/2009
It's amazing! Each action and desire was written so true to Edward. Every time he looked at Bella and examined her I felt the desire in Edward. I really loved it. Sure, it was a lemon and I really don't like them, but this one was great. It wasn't all about the sex, it was about the love. And yes, I know that is corny and cliche, but it's true. The love I felt through Edward's point of view was great. The way Edward assessed every possible scenario was so true to Edward. The uncertainty, the passion, the desire, the lust, the relief, the pleasure, the joy, the satisfaction, the peacefulness, the eroticism, and the love. You captured all of them in an utterly enticing way. The way you wrote it, the way you described it, and the was you introduced it was all so amazing. I loved it and I don't think any other lemon could compare.
-The Meaning Of Life
| Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Great stuff. Loved it.
| Arendra chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
This is the best Twilight fiction i have ever read. Not only beautifully written,not only sexy and subtle at the same time, but also perfectly describing the love and passion between the characters. I could literally see and feel what they where doing or thinking. And it was closest to what I imagined while reading the Twilight series. I have to say that after what S. Meyer had given us in Breaking Dawn, i was really very disappointed. She created a great tension between Edward and Bella throughout the whole story, and when it finally came to their wedding night, she took away from us all the pleasure of going through this with the characters. That caused frustration, and now after reading your fiction Im finally satisfied. Because this is exactly how i imagined Edward and Bella's first time would be. Thank you for this.
| VenomousKisses chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Wow, Relative just took the words out of my mouth. :P
I am seriously awed by this story, I'm showing ALL of my friends this. :D You are a very good writer and I look forward to read more of your stories. :)
| jazzberry chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
excellent story you can really feel the struggles that edward is going through on their honeymoon beautifully written
| thewasofshall chapter 3 . 3/7/2009
I think this is very well written... not only does it fulfill all the crazy fantasies I had floating around in my head after SMeyer so effectively cockblocked their honeymoon (really... two lines?), you stay in character amazingly well. Edward and Bella sleeping together must have taken, what, twenty minutes? But, instead of merely stating what they're doing, you get us in Edward's mind and we experience what he's feeling and what Bella's feeling; pretty awesome considering Breading Dawn feels like the shoddy fanfiction when compared to this story. Just when I want Edward to stop over thinking things and STFU already, you delve right into classy smut... my favorite. :)