Reviews for Isle Esme
becky chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
omg! I have never read anything so detailed in my life. This was so freaking awesome you did a great good. i read both parts within an hour and half and and am now glad that i put off my college work i needed to go to read this! Thanks
Frakking Toasters chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
All I can really say is WOW!
Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
This just couldn't be any better. FANTASTIC. I feel like I'm there - or more to the point, I wish I was there... VampGirl
BloodyInspiredMalace chapter 2 . 4/11/2009
Best Isle Esme story ever!
BloodyInspiredMalace chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
BLilTXgirl chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Bella has seriously got some amazing restraint. If it were me Edward would need every ounce of his physical strength because I couldn't have endured such a slow, passionate build up and would have already attacked him.
Barbie2 chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
great story
Kisserine chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Sorry for asking but will there be a Isle Esme part three?
CoCo1996 chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
Jesus Christ! the guy has GOT to stop berating himself! she didn't get hurt...! ok, i read the book, guilty as charged even though im only twealve, so, i was listening to The Veronica's 'Untouched' yeah, im gonna need a cold shower, great fic!
Twilight's Sapphire chapter 3 . 3/31/2009
Wow, that was amazing. It was like you caught my imagination when I was reading Breaking Dawn and putting in my thoughts what Stephanie either couldn't or wouldn't write. The funny thing is, I see Robert and Kristen in my mind...such a voyer. But it's like I would almost want them to read this to get the feel what what would be needed if they get around to making the movie of Breaking Dawn.

You captured everything I would want to see or experiance with them on the screen without it being porn.

It was a beautifully written story, Thanks
laraspain chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Hi Tiffany, thank you so much for sending me the link to your fan fiction. I love hoy swwet and intense your story was. A little sad at the end but we all know what happens next, right?

I plan on reading your other stories as well.

Thank you again forsharing your talet with the rest of the twilighters.
Petuniac3 chapter 3 . 3/25/2009
all I can say is WOW
IceTease69 chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
This has got to be the hands down best Isle Esme I have ever read. You captured the need of the characters, the sensuality of their experience, and the concern and restraint Edward needed for them to actually pull this off, all while being SMOKING hot.

Excellent work. Just Wow.
Juliejuliejulie chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
Wow, that was really, really good. I wrote my own version of the honeymoon, but mine is very different than yours. I think yours is much truer to Edward, that he would be relentless in his fight for control, that every pleasurable feeling would be countered with anxiety or detached concentration. It was frustrating-the constant moving one step forward and two steps back, so much hesitancy!, but I think you totally nailed what Edward would do in this situation. (I'm just too impatient and horned up not to move things along faster.) The slow build was great, and it made for such compelling reading. You captured Bella's patience with him and preserved her innocence (in a way that I didn't). You also addressed the hymen issue really well (although you didn't mention him smelling the tinge of blood I'm sure he would have noticed.) I love how you started the story, explained why Edward chose Isle Esme, and what he was thinking/feeling when he bit the pillows. Wonderful story-I heard about it from the Perv Shack ladies and I'm so glad I got to read it! Thanks!
SydneyAlice chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
I'm new to this community, but I wanted to let you know that this is absolutely the best fan fic I've read so far. You captured Edward so perfectly! Everything was perfection. I even cried. I look forward to reading your other stories.
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